Comments | kwir_theory: I think it's like this and you're always about that

kwir_theory

I think it's like this and you're always about that

Jan 31, 2005 12:21

EDIT 4/20/2005: I revised this poem and I'm taking it down until I can take some time to put up the new version, this time with the *RIGHT* HTML code. Sorry for any inconvenience I may have caused.

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vcu_tomboy February 1 2005, 05:47:25 UTC

quite lovely. you captured her perfectly. i think your talent astounds me more and more each time. :)

krodannasupreme February 1 2005, 17:26:16 UTC

Whenever I read any of your work I always feel a strong mixture of a sort of sadness and pride somewhere behind my heart... but not sad-sadness, more like the feeling I feel when I listen to "Hallelujah" by Jeff Buckley, more touching, and the pride is more blushing, because your writing is so beautiful and amazing and like nothing else one could experience anywhere. I love all of your work so much, it tugs at me. You're so talented!! ahhhhhh!!!!