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[kyichu]

There’s Nothing Wrong with Me 5

Though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death…
Fink turned and gave a leery grin to Billie Joe. “Go home. You don’t want to see what’s about to happen here. I can assure you.”

Billie Joe saw more than sadistic lust in the eyes of the devil; pure evil was reflected in those flashing green eyes. He scrambled,

Comments

[21enemies]

ohhh, that was so sad :'( and yet, oddly romantic
I loved the Billie/Rev thing there... loved it.
loved this whole fucking fic, it was great <3
you're great, my friend.

[kyichu]

Thanks so much!
It was heart breaking, wasn't it?
I'm glad you liked the Billie/Rev ending. They were my favorite pairing throughout the whole fic, and I wanted it to end with them together.
THANKS AGAIN FOR SHARING THE LOVE!!

[mrs_saint_jimmy]

wow, that was fantastic! i did not see that coming O.O and i love how you used parts of the lord's prayer [wow, thats the only biblical thingy i know ^^] and the end where billie is wondering where Twitch is and the last line is "Oh…there you are…"

i love this story dispite the fact that billie kicked the proverbial bucket[died] :(

[kyichu]

Thanks so much!

I'm glad you liked all the biblical references. I forgot to put in my author's note -I have to go fix it- that all italics are Twitch's thoughts, which is why I used all the biblical references.

As for the final two lines of the fic, I wanted to gibe a Pan's Labyrinth sort of feel to the story; whether or not everything is real is in the eye of the beholder , and even though the ending of tragic, the fact that he found Twitch gives a glimmer of hope.

[mrs_saint_jimmy]

yay, i like hope... be it only a glimmer or not ^^

once again, fantastic story [i'm off to go read it again, there's just so much to take in]

[awfulstate]

oh that was so saaaaad :(

i feel for like, the rev and adrienne so much, man :( but oh my lord, fink what a psycho xD beautifully executed, btw, with the lord's prayer in between it all :)

[kyichu]

Thanks! It was sad wasn't it? I sat here crying for Rev and Adie and the boys for ever.

Psycho Fink is so hard to write, so I'm really glad to hear that you liked him. He was a lot of trouble for me. XD

[kxarmstrong]

Your stories are amazing. But I'm soooo sad you killed of Billie!! *Goes and sobs*

[kyichu]

I'm glad you like my writing.
And I don't blame you being sad. I sobbed the whole time I wrote it.
If it's any consolation, I'm working one right now as a collab, and there is absolutely no sadness to it. YAY!

[kxarmstrong]

YAYYYYY!!!! MORE GOOD STORIES!!!! :)

[spaceficlover]

O.O
........
no! I hate cliffhangers. Pouts in the corner