Fic: Paternal Instinct (a wee!John fic)

[kyizi]

I should be working, you know...

Paternal Instinct
By Kyizi

Disclaimer: Stargate: Atlantis and all related items do not belong to me, only the stories and their related original ideas and characters are mine. No copyright infringement intended.
Rating: PG
Characters: Lorne, four-year-old John, mentions of Rodney
Spoilers: None, but it’s sort of

Comments

[jennytork]

This was really, REALLY good!

[kyizi]

*glee* I'm so glad you liked!

[loriel_eris]

OMG CAPSLOCK OF GLEE!!! I LOVE YOU SO VERY MUCH!!!!! I.... GOD I CANNOT TELL YOU ALL THE BITS I LOVE!

Ahem. Yes. *loves* *loves so very awesomely much*

So on that day when a frazzled Rodney McKay stormed into his quarters whilst he was getting dressed, held out a scrawny, confused child and said, “Major, meet the new Colonel Sheppard. Bond, or... something. Just keep it occupied and don’t bring it back for at least seven hours!” thrust the boy into his arms and stalked out, Lorne didn’t really bat an eyelid.

*dies laughing* Both at Rodney and Lorne! *g*

"Whe’s my mom and dad?" and "Don't want him to send me ‘way." and "I kinda think you’ll need to shoot Rodney before he lets you go anywhere, even when you’re big. I think you’re stuck with him, shrimp." and "Wodney’s gonna keep me?" John asks once more, just to be sure.

omg *cries* and also *glee* and *hugs John* and Oh Rodney.

John appears in front of him in a flash of blue light. and "I’ll just get ‘Lantis to magic me away again."

You cannot just leave it there like that

[kyizi]

ROFL! And to think this was one of the ones I wasn't 100% sure you'd love! ;p *smoosh* So glad you like!

*dies laughing* Both at Rodney and Lorne! *g*

Heh, that was actually a bit I added this morning when I was finishing it. The start was too bitty, but meant to be all together and it was all narrative, so I broke it into sections and added to it. I kinda love to think that Lorne and the others are so used to the wtf-ness of it all that it's just become normal. And, yeah, it's day one, Rodney's allowed to hand him off! ;p

You know, I almost didn't plan on broaching the thing about his parents, but then I thought I should :)

John appears in front of him in a flash of blue light. and "I’ll just get ‘Lantis to magic me away again."

You cannot just leave it there like that!!!!!

Hahahaha! It's something I've toyed with for a while, but it was actually meant to be a part of Avatar, which is so much a WiP that I stole it for here, too. It'll be explained more in the main fic... ;p

Also. Janet/Lorne?!Yes!!! Ever since I mentioned

[kyizi]

Also. Janet/Lorne?!

And also, in case anyone else reads your comment, I'll post the reminder that I've actually mentioned it (albeit obscurely) in this genre before, at the end of Christmas with the Millers.

[thdancingferret]

“Wodney’s gonna keep me?” John asks once more, just to be sure.

“You can bet on it, scamp.”

*sniffles* *cuddles wee!John* *cuddles Lorne* *thinks about cuddling Rodneny but decides it probably wouldn't be safe...* ;)

God, I adore this 'verse, this tiny version of John just breaks my heart, how everyone on Atlantis pulls together to take care of him, no one more so than Rodney. It's just... *sniffle* so lovely. Very much enjoyed this installment, looking forward to the next *g*

[kyizi]

*cuddles you* It fills me with glee to see you still enjoying this 'verse. And seeing your variation of wee!John icons makes me want to keep writing this 'verse indefinitely so that you keep using them! ;)

Glad you liked and thanks for the feedback.

[artemis_prime]

Yah, new weeJohn! It was interesting to see Lorne's perspective on this. Reminded me of Christmas with the Millers when Rodney confessed his fear of losing John. I liked that it was Lorne who helped John believe that Rodney would never let anything bad happen to him, thus, Lorne is like an uncle to Rodney's dad.

I'd love to see a vignette of how John actually became three years old and the first reactions of people at their "new" CO. Of course, I'd love to see more weeJohn anything. :)

[kyizi]

Hee, you're awesome! Thanks, I'm so glad you liked this. Also, I'm glad you get it, because the relationship between John and Lorne is actually one of my favourite parts of this universe. Rodney thinks Lorne thinks he's an awful father figure, but Lorne's actually in awe of how well ROdney handles it and doesn't think that ROdney cares what he thinks. Oh, boys! ;)

I'd love to see a vignette of how John actually became three years old and the first reactions of people at their "new" CO. Of course, I'd love to see more weeJohn anything. :)

I'm almost tempted to give you a preview of the main fic, because that's where you'll find out how and see it happen and how people react... ;)

[artemis_prime]

I am tempted to want to read a snippet, but I am more tempted to read the whole thing. So nudge, nudge. Get a move on and finish the story ;) Please! Gotta know how it started and how it's gonna end.

[kyizi]

LoL! I can take a hint! ;) I've got my laptop back and he's all fixed. I'll make the main fic one of my main priorities after I get everything back up and running (don't you hate having to reinstall everything after getting computers back at their factory settings?)

[kyizi]

*glee* I'm very glad you liked it (and still loving that icon -- note to self, get Lorne icons) and I'm really glad the idea of Lorne/Janet was likeable, too! :) It's somehting I used in an SG1 fic and it took hold and wouldn't let me go!