Don't Touch... AoiXUruha Chapter 2/??!!! (repost...old lost.)
Title: Don't Touch
Author: Kimberly <= that’s me!
Chapter: 2/??
Rating: NC-17 (might go up later)
Warnings: Overall: Smut, Rape, Self Mutilation, Drugs and Alcohol. (not in this chapter though)
Disclaimer: I do Not!
Pairing: AoiXUruha (main), ReitaXUruha (one-sided kinda) ReitaXRuki
Synopsis: When Uruha comes to a new school he is torn between the love
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WHat I like the most is probably the fact that Uruha found people to talk to ... and that the people in that school don't seem to mind his looks and / or orientation or such ... since in the last chapter, it sounded like this is usually the case.
And Aoi seems to be ... quite sure about himself *g*
Yet, I'm wondering what exactly Reita wants ... or rather 'who' ... Aoi? Uruha? ... *thinking* hmmm
And Uruha's dad ... god, it sounds like Uruha's dad only has eyes for women (too many in too short time, it seems) and Uruha feels left alone bec of that .______. this so sucks.
Btw. I like that you've said 'girls and boys standing around Aoi' ... and not just boys. Of course, we like "our" men with men, but hei ... we're girls as well and like them, aren't we? ^.^'
So, yeah. Otherwise, it would have probably sounded weird, more like a boys only school with a lot of ... at least bisexual guys xD
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I feel like I should start adding home and class scenes,
I actually never planned it,
but I want to write a great first fic so....
*thinks*...I think I am going to start chpt. 4.
(Look at all that inspiration you gave me <3<3)
Thanks for reading/commenting.
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