*Don't Touch* AoiXUruha Chapter 4!!!

[kymb3rly]

Title: Don't Touch
Author: Kimberly <= that’s me!
Chapter: 4/??

Rating: NC-17 <- maybe, not completely sure)
Warnings: Overall: Smut, Rape, Drugs and Alcohol. (not in this chapter though)
Disclaimer: I do Not!
Pairing: AoiXUruha (main), ReitaXUruha (one-sided kinda) ReitaXRuki
Synopsis: When Uruha comes to a new school he is torn between the sweet, caring

Comments

[aniffa]

Great update! I would't mind being your beta but it looks like someone beat me to it :)

[kymb3rly]

Actually, the other deleted their comment... maybe it's a retraction???
Anyways the biggest aspect I was looking for in a beta was their own writting. If you'd still like to do the job, by email, then it's yours.

kymb3rly_w3ir@yahoo.com is my address, just write me if you'd be interested.

Maybe you could edit the first chapters in your spare time (not nessesary, but appreciated) I can send them to you if you'd like.

p.s. I am a first time writer, so i am new to this too!

[aniffa]

Sounds great! I'll email you after I wake up :)
I have a lot of free time so I'd be able to get back to you within a day. Feel free to read my journal if you would first like a sample of my work.

[momiji_manjuu]

This is awesome! I just read all four chapters for the first time (I'm not sure how I missed it the first time around..) And I'm in lo~~ve, lol XD
I do have a bit of a soft spot for high school fics, especially when there's a poor, abused Uruha.. he's just so fun to be mean to XDD

I see someone else got in there, but if it falls through, I can offer up my services ^_^ English is my first language, and I like to think I have pretty good spelling/grammar skills ^^ And, I write a lot. So, yeah, if you ever need a second opinion, feel free to drop me a line ^^ I can normally read something through in a day or so, schedule-allowing.

I can't wait for more of this ^^

[kymb3rly]

Thank you for reading and offering. I will most probably be using it if needed!

I really dont know why everyone is so mean to Uru... did you notice that people are really mean to Saga too?!

If you'd like to write me at kymb3rly_w3ir@yahoo.com, I'll save your email address for the future?

P.s. sorry for the late reply T_T

[momiji_manjuu]

It's just so easy, because he's so pretty and slender, lol, he just has that kind of face. Same with Saga, I think. Aoi's got the dark mysterious thing, Reita's all macho and muscled and Ruki's cute, but has a temper (in fics) I guess because he looks so 'grr' XD Kai.. Kai's lovely, so you wouldn't WANT to hurt him, lmao XDD (Can you tell I've thought about this a lot? XD)

Ok, I'll drop you an email ^_^

[cvn17]

awww if you ever need a calm and flexible beta you can always call me
for the rest:don't worry,it was a great chapter^^
it also explains Aoi and Ruki's feelings very good
keep writing!

[kymb3rly]

Thankyou Thankyou!

I'll keep that in mind ^_^

[kysume]

Poor Uru! ;____;
This is so sad!
I want to kick Reita's ass! >____<
Uruha's life is a mess now... he can't be around Aoi because of Reita and Ruki hates him because Reita wants him for himself! Argh, that's complicated!!!!
I want Aoi to save him! ;___;

Can't wait for the next chapter and don't be to harsh to yourself this chapter was really nice even if it was short I really enjoyed it!
So... see you in the next chapter!^-^

[kymb3rly]

Thanks so Much for your kind words!

I hope to update quickley for you!