*Don't Touch* Chapters 9 and 10!!!

[kymb3rly]

 
Title: Don't Touch
Author: Kimberly <= that’s me!

Beta: aniffa
Chapter: 9/??

Rating: NC-17 (<- maybe, not completely sure)
Warnings: Overall: Smut and Rape (not in this chapter though)
Disclaimer: I do Not!
Pairings: AoiXUruha (main)ReitaXUruha (one-sided kinda)ReitaXRuki (onsided)KaiXMiyavi (girl!miyavi)
Synopsis: When Uruha comes to a new school he is

Comments

[kymb3rly]

Lets hope updates will keep up! Thanks for reading!

[andidp]

how about a compromise? rei starts to rape uru but finally realizes he doesn't want uru after all ... and lets him go ...

[nadesico_chan]

I hadn't read your comment before posting lol I totally agree with you, let's compromise!

[andidp]

*nods* ... yeah, i agree... cause it was obvious in her writing that he saw "the light" when being with Ru and thinking "oi, it can be like this??!" ... and got to experience the feeling of having a soulmate ... -.- ... rather than a slave

[kymb3rly]

Everyone is right. I will make a compromise... however If I don't finish it without telling everyone WHY reita wanted Uru in the first place It wont make any sense. *sigh*

So yes compromise... Reita seeing the light, maybe... But he's gotta be a bit more mean, before he'll break down! Yes yes sounds good?

[ko_kun]

ReixUru rape?
sure 8]
*yum*

butbut
there has to be a happy ending at some point >_

[kymb3rly]

I highly doubt it'll get that far. Sorry if I dissapointed you... happy ending DEFINATLEY!

[kymb3rly]

I agree ^_^ Thanks for reading/commenting!

[nadesico_chan]

since you ask our opinion, I have to beg you DO NOT INCLUDE A RAPE SCENE!!!pretty please. Not only because it will break my heart, but most importantly because it wouldn't be coherent with this chapter, as you showed us a Reita who is changing when having sex with Ruki, enjoying doing it with someone who's consenting. If I can allow a hint, you can always include a failed attempt at rape maybe, you know Reita almost doing it, but seeing Uru's distress and remembering the amazing sex with Ruki, he realize he can't do that anymore... It's just a suggestion of course, I'm not trying to tell you what to write, I like your story so far^^ It's just that I'm writing myself so I was just imagining...feel free to ignore me and keep up the good work!!

[kymb3rly]

Even though Rei 'changed' a bit... old habits are hard to break, we gotta have a climax!