when we sleep

[kyoandsakura]

Through blurred eyes I can see the lights flashing.

The music thumping around me.

I watch him pour another drink down his throat

…and another

I pull him around to face me, he grins.

“come on, baby, we have to go home.”

I vaguely heard him

say something about staying for the party.

I support his body as we walk out to find a

Comments

[ht_56]

soo sorry it took me ages to comment! T___T

although am not a kaoruXdie fan, i love this. i'm imagining it's kaoruXtoshiya, though. haha... forgive me? *winks*

anyway, i think you're really good. seriously. you're very simple. but your writing always hits a certain jackpot in me. =)

keep up the good work! ill wait for your next one!

[kyoandsakura]

i am very happy that you like it. its okay if your imagining kaoruxtoshiya, sometimes when i read books and i dont like the character something is happening to, i just switch the names in my head. haha thats probably bad though. oh well. it started out kaoruxkyo, like the first 4 sentences of the first draft, but then i changed it =) im wroking on a new one~its my favorite so far^^ i cant wait to see how it turns out. wow, jeez sorry i write such long replies.

[ht_56]

heya! ^__^ i hope you're doing fine and still writing! dont forget to let me know once you're done, pls? (your fave so far? yay! am excited!)

whatever you write, im sure it's gonna be great! ^^

[kyoandsakura]

im fine im fine (n_n) thanku, im not really aloud on the computer on week days so i try to get on as much as possible, iv been busy with my friends the past few weeks too but tomarrow is all alone day ^^ i love all alone day :) oh, yeah i named it . im am still writing! with every new story that seems to be my favorite. well, im in the process of writing a new one, well now im just re-writing it, its way different from the others. quite sad actually, well im having someone read it befor i post it, but i should have it up tomarrow night i think. i hope. i will tell you, first thing ^^