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[diru69]

Title:  True Life
Author:  diru69
Chapter:  8/hurr nur
Rating:  PG-something
Disclaimer:  I don't own em...  or do I?
WARNING:  Hints of yaoi, cussing
Summary:  "My legs weren't as motivated to support me now that my hands had a hold of something, and just as I was sure I could just get them to work by myself, Kyo's arms locked around me tightly,

Comments

[kampffussel]

well I dare say that little aya is going to try and say 'sorry do I know you!?!?" o_o!

I mean...hey they have to break up so that toshiya can get his ways XD

[diru69]

haha toshiya is gonna be getting his ways
whether aya likes it or not XD
but yeeeaaahh... maybe she'll "walk in" on them later
*hint hint*

[blut_royal]

Geile Zeit - Juli? WTF? XD
Thought about writing in german for a second but luckily I checked your profile first xD

Okay, I assume I know where this is heading to. And Even I really like the conversation between Toshiya and Kyo and between Toshiya and Kaoru, I'm a bit afraid that it'll become a typical "Kyo's gf was cheating on him with Kisaki, that's why La:sadies disbanded." - story.
Please don't missunderstanmd me, so far I really like the story and the way of your writing. It's just that there are a lot of stories out there with this kind of plot.

[diru69]

lol naw its fine I like constructive critism ^^
and yeah I dont like Juli as much, but it was stuck in my head XD
also, I really have no clue where this story is going...
so it could turn out that way, or it couldn't :)
but I do know one thing for sure, thats not the reason I'm gonna
say that THATS the reason La Sadies disbanded,
there's gonna be a different reason for that whole part.

[blut_royal]

They're from my hometown so I have no other choice then like them xD

Ah okay, sounds good. You never know how ppl react ^^'
Can't wait for the next part ♥

[diru69]

thx ^^ everyone's input is greatly
appreciated, just as long as the comment isn't
"OMG TWO GUYS EW GROSS WRONG NASTY >:("
no ones written that on fanfics as far as I know.
which is good cuz if someone did I'd have to rip
their stomach out >8D

[inbrilliantgrey]

Your chapters dont suck! Youre a very good writer for your age (I believe you told me once.)
Dsix, you do alot of good work in your stories, and I especially liked how you portrayed Toshiya as a sweet guy with a sort of odd shadow.
Dont underestimate yourself.

[diru69]

aw thankies

[inbrilliantgrey]

I have to give love to mah fellow writers <33
which BTW, You guys need to start posting your contest entries!