Comments | kyoxtoshiya: SUMMER, BAY-BEH

diru69 in kyoxtoshiya

SUMMER, BAY-BEH

Jun 04, 2009 21:28

Title:  Hot n' Wet
Author:  diru69
Chapters:  oneshot
Rating:  NC-FUCKING 17
WARNINGS:  ...many
Summary:  Lots of fun in a hot tub.
A/N:  for the contest ^^  sorry this is so overdue after the error, everyone. Enjoy :D

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pairing: kyoxtoshiya, format: oneshots, rating: nc-17, type: contest, author: diru69

Comments 10

inbrilliantgrey June 5 2009, 03:18:05 UTC

I lol'd hard at the end!
That was very hawt too.
Indeed.

diru69 June 5 2009, 19:10:14 UTC

thx lol sorry it
was so rushed-like... poor die an shinya

toki_thursday June 5 2009, 03:27:19 UTC

Sexy and funny...loved it!
:D

diru69 June 5 2009, 19:11:54 UTC

lol thx. haha
cum in the hot tub...
(I'm very immature so that makes
me giggle to think about.)

oo_bugaboo_oo June 5 2009, 22:08:00 UTC

Neeeeaat.

diru69 June 6 2009, 00:31:56 UTC

hehe I love your
username ^^

x_chrizzl3_x July 30 2009, 02:26:33 UTC

Ah, I can't believe I didn't comment on this earlier! I just read it a few days ago. OTL I meant to comment then, but I forgot... -fail-

Anyway, I really liked this. I felt bad for poor Kyo at the beginning. xD The sex in the hot tub was a nice touch, and the ending made me laugh. Of course it would be those two that would find that. xDD

Your writing is pretty good. C: I'm pretty fond of it, actually. You have a nice style.

diru69 July 30 2009, 02:29:33 UTC

yay~! haha thx and yes
die and shinya always get
the awkward moments XD

x_chrizzl3_x July 30 2009, 02:54:23 UTC

You're welcome~ Yeah, they've seen stuff like this before in a fic I wrote a while back called "Between". Those poor guys are always at the wrong place at the wrong time.

diru69 August 2 2009, 09:21:08 UTC

XDD