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[diru69]

Title:  True Life
Author:  diru69
Chapter:  12/spanish question marks
Rating:  PG-13
Disclaimer:  I don't own Toshiya because Kyo does
Summary:  "I fell fast asleep almost as soon as I eased my eyes closed...  and the dream that followed was so strange.  I saw myself..."
A/N:  Okay, I really am not good at writing this kind of stuff >.<  but here it is

Comments

[xdirxenxtysonx]

LMAO

'KYO,THIS IS KIDNAPPING!'<33 ah :'D

This is really good ^0^

[diru69]

lol I read somewhere
that Toshiya liked to
joke about getting kidknapped from
his band by kyo and kaoru, so
thats where I got that from XD
lol thx, this is kinda tricky for
me to write as far as detail goes heh

[lastsecretgarde]

hooray! you really wrote it!!!!

and you didn't disappoint! your writing really has gotten stronger over the months!!!! i LOVE the kidnapping, and poor shy Toshiya trying to get used to the new situation, and the loveable, goofy band.

and i even love the final confrontation between him and Hisao, because it kind of highlights how everyone sees and writes Toshiya, but in a way that shows it's just so far off.

i love it love it love it thank you thank you thank yoooooooooou!!!!

[diru69]

lol np ^^ If I update this
again, I'm gonna do another
room 304 chapter first tho
I've been dying to do some
dysfunctional relationship
shiz >D