Random Emo Poem
Feeling emo for reasons related to RL and such. Or maybe its just cause i'm a natrually emo person. I've been writing lots of depressing stuff lately...
Anyway's, I just thought i'd post this poem i wrote out in about five minutes. Its not fandom based or anything But I wouldnt be surprised if it could be related to a fandom somehow XP Anyway...
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Yay, more writing from you! I really liked these lines: "i think its locked/ it must be locked", and "I'm free.". It's the same kind of thing I remember from your Haru story- you're good at putting in these kind of short, memorable lines that pop out and stick in my head while I'm reading the rest of it (if that makes any sense at all >>;). I wish I could offer more useful commentary, but as much as I read poetry, cannot write it to save my life, and so can do nothing but cheer you on. *cheers some more*
I've been so lazy about voting lately orz. Off to vote on that now!
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Aw thank you ^_^ I'm not brillant at poetry myself, but this was something that just popped into my head. Dont worry you're making PERFECT sense XD Your cheering is very heartening ^_^ Although I do believe you could probably write poetry if you wanted to
No its okay! I understand! I wasnt trying to pressurize you into voting or anything O_O!
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You're welcome *3*. Well, I think you're really good, so- *continues to cheer*. I tried before. It does not work for me. At all.
No, you weren't! There have been so many new apps there lately that I missed yours, and I've been really lazy about it anyway because mirror themes are really hard to vote on, for me only voting on people I like now :D.
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*Is flatterted thats she's one of them XD* I prefer mirror themes though ^_^ Its easier to just look at a picture and think of which one looks the most similar. But that's just me.
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Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it . The changing view on the box was my fave part of the poem. The box was really open all along and there was nothing stopping the narrator from going out of the box all along, except for his/her own insecurities. And it is kinda sad...told you i was feeling emo XP
hehe the end...okay so i screwed up the end! I couldnt get it to fit for some reason TT_TT But your reasoning makes me feel better, like itssvyis;;u kinda logical X3
And thank you! Second time being stamped as him, first time being on the regular app XD Thanks taking the time to vote!
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*glances arround shiftily* Why do i feel like i'm in danger now?
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