KHR Fic- Cielo

[kyradesu]

Title- Cielo
Author - Kyradesu
Rating - G
FF.net Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5885412/1/
Characters/Pairing - Vongola guardians & slight Tsuna/Kyoko
Warnings - None
Summary - She learnt long ago to watch the sky as she waited for his return.

Comments

[rinhail]

Beautiful writing! I love your portrayal of Kyoko waiting patiently for Tsuna. :)

[kyradesu]

Thank you! ^_^ I'm glad you liked it.

[come_home_laika]

I really love that you decided to do all the guardian's roles from Kyoko's point of view. I've always wondered how she would react if she got together with Tsuna and was a part of his whole life in the mafia, seeing all these people she knew since childhood or middle school becoming involved in something that dangerous. She's such a loving person, but she also worries a lot, and I like that you got that about her with this. My favorite part is the way you describe the cloud, because even though I'm not a big Hibari fangirl, I think the cloud guardian role is the most interesting one out of all of them, and you made it so pretty to read about. And the last few lines, after you describe the sky, that part is just gorgeous, especially the part about Tsuna being Kyoko's sky too.

[kyradesu]

Thnk you! To be honset the cloud was really the hardest part for me to write. I left if for last because I had NO idea how to describe the cloud's role. But i'm happy you think it turned out well in the end. :D

[main_titles]

I loved your descriptions of the guardians and the wave types! <333333

[kyradesu]

THank you! Thanks for reading ^_^

[kyradesu]

Thank you! I am not worthy of such overwhelming praise *Grovels*

I havent read any koyoko fic's so i dont know about sue-ifying her. Personally i dont really like the image of her being just a helpless, ignorant girl who as you said, is just dutifully domesitic in the absence of the others. She knows whats going on and she has the faith in Tsuna and the others to wait for them to return.

And you're right, the bracketed portions were intended to depict a battle going on away from where Kyoko was, basiclly a battle the vongola guardians were involved in that shows how they're related to what she's observing in the sky.

Thanks so much ^_^ I loved writing the mist part Because i'm biased towards mist XD. I decided to put them both in because rightfully, they're both guardians (Even though if you had to ask me to pick just one i'd say Mukuro ^_^" Sorry chome!) SO in the end they're both really important in they're own ways. I like the idea of a balancing act between them :D

Reminds me of falling flower petals or summatSakura saku, mai