Comments | kyttenfae: "Hunter" (JongKey) R

kyttenfae

"Hunter" (JongKey) R

Jul 14, 2011 19:30

Title: Hunter
Fandom: SHINee
Pairing: (fairly broken) JongKey
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence (including character death), language and implied sex
Wordcount: 2022
Summary: SHINee’s been broken up for five years, and Kibum’s realised just how messed up his life has become and how much he wants to be free again.
Notes: Inspired by Dido’s “Hunter.” I've ( Read more... )

jongkey, writing, fanfic

Comments 4

stjoan4eva July 15 2011, 03:55:43 UTC

He gave in to it, almost crying with relief to find he was still able to take the beat and transform it into something wild and unearthly and freeing. The boy-man could barely keep his eyes and hands away from Kibum. It was exhilarating and flattering and he craved it like a drug he thought he’d kicked.

This is one of my favorite lines. Loved the overall tension in this fic, just lovely!

imvus July 15 2011, 04:09:04 UTC

This is actually very sad. Poor Key, I would never have thought he would allow it to get so bad. but that's how love does sometimes...get you in so deep before you realize that the love is gone and it was a trap. I don't feel to sorry for Jonghyun (not that I would wish death on anyone) but in all honesty that may have been a better out for him then to lose Key and realize what he used and lost. ( oh god that kind of sound horrible don't it.. but I have low tolerance for controling and abusive... and he was verbally abuse with all that crap coming out of his mouth.)

Just sad. (very well written)

jinkibumiminho July 15 2011, 04:57:44 UTC

[confetti]
I don't know why, but I love to hate Jjong (not IRL, just SHINee needs a villian, and he's it for me). This was a wonderfully dark picture of what could be. I agree with Tiff about my favorite section. I'd love to see Kibum on the dance floor when he's not trying to impress anyone but himself.

Well done!

addicterated July 15 2011, 05:12:10 UTC

as ever, i think you are such an amazing writer and should write more often...this is an amazing piece, it reads like poetry and burns like a thousand cuts...

I always think Key is hiding something tragic...*sigh*

And i agree with the other person who said, Jjong makes a good bastard for some reason.