Life's Lessons [Oneshot]

Nov 18, 2009 16:56


Title: Life's Lessons

Pairing: JunChun/YooSu

Length: One shot (1,497 words)

Genre: Angst, Drama

Rating: PG

Warnings: Mild hints of blood

Summary: A young man opens his classmates' eyes to their cruelty to the one he loves.

A/N: I have not disappeared and I am not on hiatus. I'm working on NaNoWriMo, I'm making a “novel” of short stories based ( Read more... )

genre:angst, length:oneshot, rating:pg, genre:drama, pairing:yoosu, pairing:junchun, fanfic:nano

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l_ai_l November 18 2009, 22:21:35 UTC
You're right and I really wanted to see my readers grasp that concept. :3

I've been made fun of in school, but my sister was made fun of worse than myself... and if I had to chance to go back now and say something to all those people who hurt my sister, I would do just like Su. =)

Thanks for commenting, bb~

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suju_shinki November 18 2009, 22:22:09 UTC
you almost got me crying T_T
I'm happy it ended well. Really this was beautifull ^^

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l_ai_l November 18 2009, 22:24:43 UTC
Aw ♥ *huggles*

Thank you so much ^^

cause we all know when I make my readers cry, my head swells.

=3

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allase November 18 2009, 22:39:21 UTC
you you YOU !!!

you had me all crying cause i thought he was dead ><

but the happy ending *dadaaaan* <3<3 !!!

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l_ai_l November 18 2009, 22:43:26 UTC
*grins*

I know... I've been taking snark lessons from Changmin. LOL

Glad you liked, bb~!!

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padmik November 18 2009, 23:41:38 UTC
i almost cried ;---; i thought he was dead. oh.. oh this kind of reminded me of my freshmen year at highschool when our valedvictorian died in a car accident. he was a great student though and everyone liked him but the feeling i got from junsu's speech reminded me of how depressed the school felt a couple of days after he died.

it's sad that this can be true in some occasions :( but at least, in the end, yoochun did have people that cared for him :) great shot! and good luck on your dbsk novel~

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l_ai_l November 19 2009, 00:04:54 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. And that's so sad about the student at your school. :(

Thanks! I have posted another story from my novel too. Its comedy... (failed comedy that is.)

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ting5 November 18 2009, 23:49:36 UTC
for awhile i thought Yoochun's gone but luckily he's not and from the looks of it his legs can still be use ^^ lovely piece of work :D

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l_ai_l November 19 2009, 00:06:28 UTC
^^ Well, I kinda wanted to scare my readers into thinking I'd killed off Chunnie, but no fear, I didn't.

;-; I dun like character death. (especially not now x.x)

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