The Pharaohs compassion in this chapter really touched me. I hope he stays true to his word and lets Adam go. Adam deserves to find some piece. When he realized that his love for Kris was bigger and better than his lust for the Pharaoh I found myself very proud of him choosing the love over the power.
You write so beautifully. I'm not sure I blinked, let alone breathed, while reading this.
I hope that Adam finds his way to Kris, but even moreso, I hope that the Pharoah can somehow punish his sister, and even moreso than that, elevate Nesa to rule over the three wicked witches.
The Pharoah is the most powerful person in the land. I m sure that he can make this all happen!
Nesa is an angel. Adam is lucky that the Pharaoh is an understanding Pharaoh. He really does care about Adam, more than his wives. The two wives are selfish beasts, they only want the status and the money.
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You write so beautifully. I'm not sure I blinked, let alone breathed, while reading this.
I hope that Adam finds his way to Kris, but even moreso, I hope that the Pharoah can somehow punish his sister, and even moreso than that, elevate Nesa to rule over the three wicked witches.
The Pharoah is the most powerful person in the land. I m sure that he can make this all happen!
Can't wait until the next update.
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