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l_awlietxoxx

Submission and Addiction Stress

Mar 02, 2011 22:27

In the midst of my stressing over college and life in general, I've been thinking lately about whether I really like the Egyptian turn I took in my fic. All of a sudden I feel unsettled about it. The perspective or main purpose of the fic may have shifted away from what it was originally. Anyone who's reading my fic and sees this, would you mind ( Read more... )

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l_awlietxoxx March 3 2011, 21:05:01 UTC

thanks bb : )) All of you guys' comments are actually making me feel better. I'm glad the plot now seems natural and like a good turn....I'm feeling better about it now and I've been working on the new part today. :)

heythere_santi March 4 2011, 03:02:54 UTC

squanto. this fic is amazing. i remember when you first got the idea and you were explaining it to me. it sounded amazing and it is. everything flows nicely together and it doesnt seem like anything is out of place (nor are there any bad turns). stop worrying. your fic is perfect and ur an awesome writer!

and way off to the side sidenote, i may have figured out a few harmonies for summertime =]

untamedfilly March 6 2011, 21:31:07 UTC

You know I've been a dedicated reader and fan of this story, and I can say with full honesty that everything you've written has been nothing short of perfect. Adam & Kris will grow and learn so much about their feelings and what they mean to each other in the upcoming chapters, and when Adam is well, I can't even imagine how beautiful it will be when they express their love to each other physically.

Seriously, I enjoyed every twist and turn, and the pharaoh/egyption take made for interesting, if not enjoyable reading!

l_awlietxoxx March 6 2011, 21:48:00 UTC

Thanks so much for your comment. :) You really have been sticking with me since the beginning! And thanks for continuing to do so through my silly fickleness. >.> I've decided to keep on going with my current plan, and I've been writing the new part, albeit slowly. More is definitely coming and with no major changes, even though it might take a bit of time. I can't say exactly why, but the next part is proving to be really difficult for me to write. I know what to write, just not how to write it. >.< But as I said, it's on its way!
Thanks again bb. <3

untamedfilly March 7 2011, 22:23:46 UTC

YW bb! Trust me, it's my pleasure...

Take your time. It'll be worth the wait!

Egypt reply karenmitchell March 8 2011, 11:51:05 UTC

I didn't really find the Egypt thing a distraction since you set it up early on in a way, but I did find it strange that the situation was so easily accepted by Kris etc. and it took ages for them to do something. <3

Re: Egypt reply l_awlietxoxx March 8 2011, 22:06:46 UTC

I wouldn't say it took them ~ages~ to do something, but yeah I did have to get Adam kinda settled in at the palace for a while, which meant Kris and Michael not breaking him out. But there wasn't really anything they could do when Adam was taken, or afterwards - since Lady Merrick had her guards keep Adam on such a short leash.
Thanks for your input, though. I always like understanding the extend of what you guys are feeling/thinking about the fic. :)