To Mikami

[l_desu_bong]

 I was rather lonely, even though you're home now, and I got to thinking of ways I can detain criminals...like Light...when they are a match for my intellect. Like Light... I decided to try and be more creative. So, I decided to write you a poem. If you hate it at least pretend to be kind because it isn't as if I do this often.

You smile, you smile

Comments

[initiative]

While I can't claim to understand the context of your poem, I must say that it's beautifully written. It's quite a talent for words, you have there. I look forward to reading more of your work should you decide to share more of it in the future.

[l_desu_bong]

Um...my fiance are from the same "world", as many people put it here. He worshipped a killer that I was trying to capture. When I died he met the killer and then he too became a killer.

My heir took on the case and then the killer was captured. My fiance was captured as well and his "God" (The killer) basically tried to escape by putting all attention on my fiance. My fiance commited suicide, which I suspect was the influence of my heir, and then he died. The killer followed shortly after.

*smiles* You really think it's beautifully written? Thank you. I was just...expressing feelings for Mikami.

I...I might put up other works. If Mikami likes it.

[initiative]

Sounds like it was quite a tragedy.

I do, and I am certain that your Mikami will think the same.

[l_desu_bong]

It...It was, yes. But it's over....It is, in fact, over.

I am sure he will like it too. That is, if he reads it.

[smackthepanda]

...I don't get it.

[l_desu_bong]

It's a bittersweet love poem.

[smackthepanda]

Hmmmm... I've gotta say that it's at least very original. I've never heard anyone use the phrase "Then you shove a pen into your stomach" in a love poem before.

[winged_cherry]

L-san, you sound so sad...

[l_desu_bong]

Oh I am sorry. I must be so depressing...and right before Valentine's Day. I should really learn my manners. It's bad to depress people.

I just wonder about him...our love...*sigh*

[winged_cherry]

You don't have to apologize! It's okay to be sad sometimes, and it's okay to tell people about it! I was just worried...

Can I do anything to help?

[baron_vn_blubba]

With what rhythm and what rhyme
does this your poem use in time?
I see no reason, time, or trial
that makes its reading worth my while.

But poetry... well, it sustains me.
Reading this? It rather pains me.

[l_desu_bong]

Whoever said poetry had to have rhyme?

Why can't it just be an expression for how I feel for my beloved fiance?

[the_grinreaper]

... I dunno. My personal opinion... It don't sound too good ta me. Kinda like.. huh... Real depressin' is all. I wouldn't say romantic.

[l_desu_bong]

Sometimes I worry that I should take this into consideration...

I have been hearing that a lot.

So, perhaps posting the second one would be better? More...romantic I hope