Binary - Chapter Nine

[l_forevermore]

Title: Binary
Author: Lost Forevermore or Woebegone121
Rating: R for swearing, themes, and violence. (as of now. Rating is subject to change.)
Pairings: Sora/Riku, Axel/Roxas, and various other random scatterings
Genre: Mystery/Romance
Disclaimer: If I owned it, Kingdom Hearts would be a musical.
Warnings: Slash, language, possible adult content,

Comments

[keldjinfae_moon]

Axel was laughing like he’d just seen Britney Spears take a dive off the wing.

I loved that. So. Much. And you already know my thoughts on Axel's perversion (what with him being in my brain and all; dude, I have a brain bush... dirty).

The way you write Riku's thought process is fantastic, with his mind being... like a normal person's, while he doesn't really have to actually say much so he can be stoic Riku without having to be... brainless. Make any sense?

I can't wait until we all get to figure out what the hell is going on, both with the past and what's going to happen to them now.

[l_forevermore]

I cackled uncontrollably at "brain bush."

Totally makes sense... Stoic =/= contemplating the wall, which I sometimes see in fic. Bugs me.

I can't wait to write that... Ugh. I hope I can do it soon.

[keldjinfae_moon]

Right. Just because Riku's quiet doesn't mean he isn't thinking. I wrote Silence on the premise that Riku chooses not to speak because he believes it's easier, that it's protecting everyone. So that was a challenge, especially since I identify the most with Sora, and yet my first story was from Riku's POV. lol

Also, Casey and I were just discussing this, and we both love that Riku and Sora didn't just get it on. There's obvious attraction there, but there's this drama they have to deal with, and they're still open enough to address the possibility of later without having to cuss each other out or have sex right away.

[l_forevermore]

Oh, Riku thinks. Riku overthinks in my opinion. He overthinks and he angsts and then he thinks some more. I remember Silence... For the record, I loved Silence.

At first, I was actually going to have them just go, "whee, sex!" but I read it through and it just didn't work. It would have been way too fast, and then I couldn't have the ending I wanted.

[mistyeyedreamer]

*waves* Hey, I've kinda been reading this for a few chapters, but didn't notice you were posting on LJ, so I was just hovering over at FF.net. Yeah.

This was awesome xD I loved the loud shouting bits, they made me laugh (or they would have if my mom wasn't sleeping nearby). And I also liked how Riku and Sora didn't go have sex right at the end, cause yeah, it probably would have been too soon.

...Axel was calling him snuggle-bear? Oh wow...

[l_forevermore]

Hi!

Oh, it would've been too soon, definitely... I thought it all out after I wrote that first little bit of sex, and it just... Agh. I'd explain, but then I'd probably spoil the ending, and you just can't do that with a mystery.

Yeah, Axel's a peach like that... A very brave peach, borderline suicidal. (He also called Roxas "pookie". Once. Somewhere between the death of Axel's Firebird and the handcuffs.)

Thanks for reading! ^^

[mistyeyedreamer]

I'm cool with not being spoiled for fics, don't worry. Today, though, I (accidentally) found out the whole plot for 358/2 Days (stupid wiki), and my brain is kinda dead. I don't like that feeling.

...Oh my. I...I don't know what's worse...pookie or suggle-bear. *shudder* Axel, you are a brave, brave man. Crazy, but brave.

[l_forevermore]

Oh... I'm so sorry. See, I banned myself from Wiki for that reason, I hate knowing what happens in stuff.

Pookie, definitely. Axel wound up eating gravel with the handcuffs too tight for that one.

[chokethewind]

I keep reading this in individual parts. One day I am going to go back and read the beginning because I want to know the plot. Your writing is just awesome and funny and draws me in with the individual parts too. So in other news: awesome. Can't wait for more. :)

[l_forevermore]

Yeah, the plot's probably going to start being important really soon (assuming I figure out what exactly the plot is... ;3). I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading!

[eternal_moonie]

Absolutely LOVED this chapter!! Well done!