@_@ noo... why are you making us wait? i know you have the rest all sequestered in your computer!
anyway, another great chapter :3 asides from a few little errors that would be smoothed out with a proofreading, i love your writing ^.^ If i bribe you with comments for each chapter, will you send me the rest asap? ;_;
if you send me the errors, maybe. Part of the reason I haven't posted what I have as it's hard for me to see errors and I keep re-reading! But glad you're hanging in there. Feel free to email me any mistakes that you see.
I so like the ideo of Snape giving and takling points for choosing partners in potion!! SO GOOOOOOOOD! *love for Severus*
and shit-eating-grins!!!
Damn Blaise. And damn Harry -was that speccy git actually smiling? Blaise was as good as dead. Yay for jealousy!!! hahaha Blaise/Harry is a nice couple!
why don’t you just say it instead of going ballistic every time he time he touches Zabini?”
Draco’s jaw clenched and he crushed the dried beetles in his bare hands. ‘Harry’d touched Blaise? ohh dear Hermione YOU ARE GREAT, spread the burning fire in his chest *giggles*
Indeed, he was going to have to make a note to warn Blaise that his hair was turning red. I´m COLLAPSING!!!!
I still don´t get it what sort of flashing light was that? and WHO not Harry, Granger? he heard her words... so yes and Harry was defending him? and Finnigan took him away Right???
DOBBY *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
I like Pansy, and usually I DON´T! but she is quite annoying and that is VERY interresting
That was actually supposed to be confusing --as a sign to Draco's upset. All will be answered with the exception of who pulled Draco away. I'm thinking it was Ron, who was right there with Hermione.
Regardless, so glad that you're still with me and that you're enjoying my rather sympathetic, yet snarky, portrayal of the Slytherins!
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anyway, another great chapter :3 asides from a few little errors that would be smoothed out with a proofreading, i love your writing ^.^ If i bribe you with comments for each chapter, will you send me the rest asap? ;_;
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I'm thinking that should be "feel".
Sorry I wasn't around to proof-read.
:-)
How the hell do you do that italic thing?
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SO GOOOOOOOOD! *love for Severus*
and shit-eating-grins!!!
Damn Blaise. And damn Harry -was that speccy git actually smiling? Blaise was as good as dead.
Yay for jealousy!!! hahaha Blaise/Harry is a nice couple!
why don’t you just say it instead of going ballistic every time he time he touches Zabini?”
Draco’s jaw clenched and he crushed the dried beetles in his bare hands. ‘Harry’d touched Blaise?
ohh dear Hermione YOU ARE GREAT, spread the burning fire in his chest *giggles*
Indeed, he was going to have to make a note to warn Blaise that his hair was turning red.
I´m COLLAPSING!!!!
I still don´t get it
what sort of flashing light was that? and WHO not Harry, Granger? he heard her words... so yes
and Harry was defending him? and Finnigan took him away
Right???
DOBBY *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*
I like Pansy, and usually I DON´T! but she is quite annoying and that is VERY interresting
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Regardless, so glad that you're still with me and that you're enjoying my rather sympathetic, yet snarky, portrayal of the Slytherins!
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