fic: the shooting stops

Oct 12, 2010 12:17

Title: The shooting stops
Author: l_s_d_me
Pairing: Brad/Nate
Rating: R
Word Count: 2800
Disclaimer: Based on portrayals from Generation Kill and has no base in reality.
Notes: Must thank the lovely meeks00 for the beta and for forcing me to post this no matter what. Any errors you see are all mine bc I like to leave traces around that the world is imperfect… ( Read more... )

author: l_s_d_me

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stilettoxmafia October 13 2010, 08:22:50 UTC
I loved the build of this.

And this line: So they grasped onto each other, holding and releasing, never in unison but together. Brad absently thought that they themselves were like the ocean, ebbing and flowing together, moving at different times but always together. Powerful. Beautiful. Absolute.

So wonderful and a perfect description.

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l_s_d_me October 13 2010, 11:50:04 UTC
ahh thank you so much!!

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summersiren October 13 2010, 11:00:37 UTC
OH MY! This was waaay hotter than a game of gay chicken. Oh boys! <3

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l_s_d_me October 13 2010, 11:47:39 UTC
bahahahahahahaha yeah gay chicken wasn't all it was cracked up to be.

THANK YOU!!!

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asimplechord October 13 2010, 13:10:32 UTC
For some reason, that little wink in the first section really caught me, hook, line, and sinker. As it did Brad, I imagine. :D

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l_s_d_me October 14 2010, 00:34:35 UTC
thanks!! and yeah, it hooked me too! ;)

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l_s_d_me October 14 2010, 00:35:35 UTC
hmmmmmm i might need to know what made you blush. ;)

that gif of the dogs humping is aweeeeeeeeeesome.

also - THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUU!!!

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l_s_d_me October 14 2010, 00:52:47 UTC
hahahaha you know how i like my memory refreshed.

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l_s_d_me October 14 2010, 00:35:50 UTC
OH GOD I THINK I JUST CAME.

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l_s_d_me October 14 2010, 00:49:17 UTC
omg right click save


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