fic: velocity equals the distance traveled divided by time

Oct 22, 2010 20:10

Title: Velocity Equals the Distance Traveled Divided by Time
Author: l_s_d_me
Pairing: Ray/Brad, kid
Rating: R
Genre: AU
Word Count: 10,000+
Disclaimer: None of the following is based in fact.
Notes: This legit wouldn’t have gotten done without meeks00 and her magical powers of awesomeness.
Summary: Ray has a daughter and never joins the Marines. He ends up ( Read more... )

author: l_s_d_me

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laorion October 23 2010, 04:49:25 UTC
ohhh....my...you...*gasp*...beautiful....I...ummm....yeah....

(In my culture that means you f'in rock)

*LOVE*

:)

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l_s_d_me October 23 2010, 04:52:47 UTC
ahahaha thank you!!!

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live_laugh_love October 23 2010, 06:10:58 UTC
your love for Ray really comes through here. beautiful. xo

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l_s_d_me October 23 2010, 11:18:34 UTC
that's such a sweet comment, babe!!! <333

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salvadore_hart October 23 2010, 07:40:57 UTC
This is so beautifully in character. Even in Au you kept the little details that make Ray, like being a messy eater.
And the banter was just hilarious.
I love Dad!Ray, and Samantha.

AND I loved the pace. It was very Brad and Ray to have sex before the "remember-I-have-a-kid" speech but it was functional. and hot. :)

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l_s_d_me October 23 2010, 11:20:30 UTC
THANK YOU!! I thought it'd be fun to keep in what makes ray who he is while having it in a different setting. I'm so glad you liked it!

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stilettoxmafia October 23 2010, 09:35:48 UTC
I can tell how much fun you have writing Ray's dialog. It shows and its wonderful. I was in stitches over him going off on Dora the Explorer.

I loved this story. It was so sweet and wonderful. AHHHH! More, plz?

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l_s_d_me October 23 2010, 11:22:16 UTC
omg thank you *blushes*

I'm not going to lie, i may have laughed really hard a few times while writing this (that dora bit is my favourite!!)

idk if there'll be more.. hmm... it is very open ended.. i might.. yeahhh i'll probably write more of this, lol.

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stilettoxmafia October 23 2010, 18:08:13 UTC
Even if you don't write more, it was a fantastic one off and I loved it. Awesome job, bb.

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l_s_d_me October 23 2010, 20:03:37 UTC
*huggles you to death*

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janes_thomas October 23 2010, 09:43:14 UTC
ahhhhhhhh. . . . . lovely

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l_s_d_me October 23 2010, 11:22:43 UTC
THANKS!!!

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