fic: velocity equals the distance traveled divided by time

[l_s_d_me]

Title: Velocity Equals the Distance Traveled Divided by Time
Author: l_s_d_me
Pairing: Ray/Brad, kid
Rating: R
Genre: AU
Word Count: 10,000+
Disclaimer: None of the following is based in fact.
Notes: This legit wouldn’t have gotten done without meeks00 and her magical powers of awesomeness.
Summary: Ray has a daughter and never joins the Marines. He ends up

Comments

[emeilia_rose]

OMG Gurrrrrl. I love this forever.

I'm not quite sure how to tell you how much I adore this without sounding like a total loon.

This was lovely and perfect and so much more than I expected out of a kid!fic.

Don't ever stop writing, or I will cry.

[l_s_d_me]

ahhhhhh thank you, bb!!!

don't you know by now that i fully endorse sounding like a loon when excited about something?? ;)

you're so sweet! I won't stop, i promise! may already be thinking about a lovely domestic sequel

[mcl4r3n]

I'm gonna jump in here and say ditto!

[l_s_d_me]

THANK YOUUUU!!!!!!

[deedlit50]

“Well, Semper Fi like a motherfucker, G.I. Joe,” Ray salutes, turning to run on before Brad can razz him about calling him G.I. Joe.

Oh my God. Oh My God. Oh My GOD!!! O.O I'm not a Ray/Brad girl but shit, this. You. Jesus! I LOVE this story.

Lauren, this has got to be the best thing you have ever written. Brad and Ray's voices were perfect and it was hot enough to set the drapes on fire.

I... cripes. THIS! Just this.

[l_s_d_me]

awwwww heather! ♥ ♥ thank you so much!!!

I"m going to be honest and say that this is the first time i've written something when i wasn't amazingly depressed, and i think you can tell.

but thank you thank you thank you!

[pjvilar]

Not nearly the comment this fic deserves, but I wanted to at least stop in and tell you I loved it. Great work.

[l_s_d_me]

thank you <3 I love any comment so this one makes me just as happy as a super long one would :D

[trying_t0_be]

WTF!!!! I didn't post a comment on this fic O_o OHGOD I'm so happy to re-read it, to the point where if I had commented before I would have post another one now.

I loved it, I love like everything from this fic, but I particularly love that Brad love Ray that he doesn't care is he has a daughter. (does it even make sense?)

ILU!

[l_s_d_me]

hey!!! :D I love this fic, and always love to have new comments on it!! This one always ends up with random new comments, and this one made me so happy!!!!!!! I'm so glad you liked it!!