Takin Care O Business

[l_the_fangirl]

Afternoon to y'all.

Spent the morning working on the house - living in a house my parents are renovating, and they removed the chimney, so I'm stacking bricks. Good workout, actually; I lost an inch doing it. 57'' is a horrible waistline size, but it beats the hell out of 58'': 56 and no or bust next week, here's hoping

Comments

[chess]

*waves* pick me, pick me?

[l_the_fangirl]

Soitenly!

[metalfatigue0]

Yeah, sure.
What kind of critique will you be expecting?

[l_the_fangirl]

First off, just vote on scenes you want to see next - it's organized like an LP/playthrough of the game. I'll abstract the combat a bit, but will accept suggestions for Hotshot options (as well as point out things that are ripe for them).

Second, just - harsh-but-fair constructive criticism. Be ruthless, but be polite. Fridge logic, odd characterization, 'this character annoys me for X reason' sort of thing.

[l_the_fangirl]

so i herd u liek bliss stage
i liek bliss stage too

[this_troper]

I'm told I'm pretty good at giving crit. Sign me up!

[l_the_fangirl]

For this next trick, I will need you to PM me with your e-mail address.

[this_troper]

Sure thing. You want me to give you my personal one or my recreational one?

[l_the_fangirl]

Recreational, please.

Go on, then

[jenewman]

*Sniff, sniff*. Hmm. I smell an opportunity to be massively pedantic about grammar *and be thanked for it!*

So yeah, sign me up.

On the other hand, you know what I'm like with follow-through (joining that LJ group for example. Yeah, that *really* happened.) Still, I'll try.

Re: Go on, then

[l_the_fangirl]

I smell an opportunity to be massively pedantic about grammar and be thanked for it!

This. But expect a lot of STET because Josh don't freaking care 'bout Strunk and White.