Nuke Big Bang 2010 fic: And Then There Were Three. Pt. 8

Jul 13, 2010 14:47


Title: And then there were three
Author: la_fours 
Artist:dirklover23 
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I own nothing, but my words and the order in which I put them. Don't sue, cause I don't want to give you my cat.
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Noah, Luke/Reid
Word Count: 21 500 for all 8 parts
Warnings: Angst, Adultery, Alison (she's not really a warning, I just like alliteration)
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rosengirl July 20 2010, 16:20:43 UTC
And *that's* how you write a triangle !

I really loved how you handled it and I must say that it was the best Reid characterization I ever read in a Nuke fic outside of Indigo's fics.

Great story, thank you so much for this.

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la_fours July 23 2010, 19:29:41 UTC
Thank you so much!!!

A part of me wants to email this and all the other triangle fic to TPTB along with a geometry text book reminding them that triangles have 3 sides!

And I am seriously awed over your comment about my Reid. I'm so happy I got him right in your eyes.

Thank you for reading, so glad you enjoyed it!

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miss_smp July 27 2010, 04:47:32 UTC
I have read this like 3 times and all I wanna know is...WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU NOT WRITING FOR US ALL.THE.TIME?????

HOLY FUCK, TONYA...THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING...EVEN IF IT DID HAVE REID IN IT!!!!!! :P

OMG THIIIIIISSSSSS..."So let me get this straight. You were afraid I would hurt you again so instead you decide to hurt me? Was this some kind of payback? Did Reid," Noah flinches as he mentions the name, "even really like me? I bet you both had a good laugh in bed about what I fool I was. Well Luke, if you wanted to hurt me for the times I hurt you, you have more than succeeded. But I'm really not a fan of this game and I would like for it to end now. So look, we're even. I broke your heart and you broke mine. Just leave me alone."....EVERY TIME I READ IT I'M IN TEARS...THANKS!!!!!!!! **CRIES** :P ( ... )

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miss_smp July 27 2010, 04:50:56 UTC
Oooops typo....should be "FUCK YOU'RE AMAZING....I.WANT.MORE!!!!!!!" :D

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crownroyal_51 July 29 2010, 02:55:08 UTC
Wow...this was amazing! You did such a good job of getting inside these guys' heads. You found a way to make sense of Luke's behavior (even though I still wanted to smack him). I'm very happy that the boys managed to find their way back to each other in the end. I've always maintained that Luke still loves Noah even though he's with Reid right now. This story only reinforces my theory. Thank you!

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pirl July 30 2010, 15:37:59 UTC
"Don't flatter yourself," Noah responds, "considering the fact that my crazy killer father is still alive, as well as the guy who kidnapped and shot me, you actually don't rank at the top of my 'don't want to talk' to list. You're just a shitty friend who fucked my boyfriend for a few weeks, I've been through worse."

Best. Response. Ever.

You made me want to stomp on Luke until his heart popped out his throat. TMI?? Perhaps. But that's how ardently I hated him thru most of this. ;)

And the Whumped!Noah!!! Oh baby, how you wear angst so well. You're a bit too forgiving, imho, but that just makes you a better person than I am.

I also liked how Reid wasn't a total evil troll. His actions were genuine, if a bit TOTALLY flawed from time to time. ;)

Great stuff!

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freakykat August 17 2010, 06:52:45 UTC
So I'm FINALLY getting to read all the other BB's and yours is the first one I chose because I've been DYING to read this since like the summary went up, okay?

I LOVE IT SO FUCKING MUCH.

Everything. From the horrible stuff that Luke did (and I think you managed to make me understand him even as I wanted to slap the crap out of him), to the Reid/Noah friendship that I LIKE WANT SO MUCH IT'S LIKE DYING, to the blow out, to Ali, to Noah being so...Noah. Everything.

Thank you so much for participating in BB and creating this awesome!

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