Tortured Body and Soul [3/3]

[la_luciernaga]

Woot~ It's done and I'll tell you know before you get down tot he end, that this isn't the end. There will probably be a follow up one shot or something, but this could totally stand alone, so I'm not making any definite promises

Comments

[ext_1319118]

OMG, I really wanted to cry when Himchan shouted out to Jongup when his baby was being raped ; A; Like the scene I just too heart-breaking ; A;
I totally love your way of writing. Everything is so...real. And I really loved that you didn't just immediately turn them back all together. It's not easy to get over something like this especially when Himchan was the one that hurt Jongup so bad like that.
So glad that they made it out TT____TT
Thank you so much for this amazing piece~

[la_luciernaga]

Thank you so much. I wanted something that would be realistic and maybe even something that someone could connect with. I am so glad that you enjoyed it. <333

[baptoki]

Oh my goodness, I really loved this!
At the beginning it was just so sad and I really thought that it couldn't get better, that Jongup was going to be killed, not by Himchan but someone else and then it got worse and I thought that in the end they'd both die and I was getting really emotional at the stage where that guy was about to violate Jongup and it was bad for a while BUT THEN it got better and Yongguk and Junhong had saved them and it turned out that they were looking for him even though Jongup thought they wouldn't and Himchan had been helping and wow, I was just so happy that Himchan turned out to be good ;;
The ending was pretty sad, but these types of endings are so much better, they just seem like more realistic? I like how it talks of a hopeful future rather than saying everything is fixed now they're free.
Anyways, long-ass lame comment sorry haha but thankyou so much for sharing this with us!!! ♥

[la_luciernaga]

It's sometimes hard to find a balance of sad and happy, and so it comes out more bittersweet. I couldn't kill any of BAP, tbh. Even in fiction, it tears my heart up to think about any of them dying and I might have thrown a fit if the muse took me in that direction.

Not a lame comment in the slightest. It's a comment that I love and appreciate. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying it as much as you did. xD

[kapike]

I'm so happy with the ending! I'm so relieved that Jongup was saved by his gang. That he was saved because Himchan knew he had to get him out of there. The ending also speaks of hope. The hope that someday Jongup will be able to heal and get past all the wounds and suffering he went through in that time. Jongup has such a big heart since if I was him I would be soooo angry at Himchan. Since it was Himchan that got him into that mess. This was so bittersweet.