Fic: Kisses (8/8)

Oct 19, 2007 12:15


Title: Kisses (8/8)
Author: Me a.k.a Read more... )

"kisses", genre: romance, fic: remus/sirius, genre: fluff, fic: harry potter

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starla_kid October 19 2007, 20:54:35 UTC
oh come ooonnnn. ehhhhhhhhh. uh. oh. that was just what i needed after a rubbish day. thank you. i really loved the description of harry. and that soft remus kissing. soft remus kissing should be available on the NHS.

sk

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labarcelona October 19 2007, 22:36:13 UTC
No, thank you!

Haha, happy this brightened your day, at least a little bit.

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brighty18 October 19 2007, 20:58:10 UTC
Oh... you made me all weepy!

I am sorry that this had to end (please start something new ASAP), but it ended SO nicely.

This about killed me: Remus’ lips find one of Sirius’ dirty, tear-stained cheeks, and then the other in an attempt to calm Sirius‘ nerves somehow. Sirius winces a little at the gesture, having not had such intimate contact in so long. Remus persists. His lips find their way slowly to a spot just above Sirius’ ear. They brush against an eyelid as they reach his slender nose. “Yes?” Remus asks Sirius, who has forgot he even began a sentence, who has forgotten everything but the feel of Remus’ arms around him and his lips moving about on his skin. Remus draws one of Sirius’ hands to his lips. “Do I still what?”

I loved Remus' perfect compassion here and your PoA era Remus/Sirius are so true to you Marauder era characters that it's very seamless.

Yay!

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labarcelona October 19 2007, 22:12:01 UTC
*Shares some tissues* Hehe, didn't mean to get you weepy.

Glad you liked the ending. I was worried about it. And I'm already working on something new. Should be up soon... if I don't get snagged on the ending, which could very well happen. >D

I quite like that paragraph, too. :)

And I'm glad the boys transitioned nicely.

Thank you so much! :D

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interrobanging October 19 2007, 22:41:32 UTC
*cries*

A beautiful, fitting end to such an enjoyable series!! I love their interaction, Remus answering the questions before Sirius even finishes them, just wonderful. This part really, really got me:

Remus’ lips find one of Sirius’ dirty, tear-stained cheeks, and then the other in an attempt to calm Sirius‘ nerves somehow. Sirius winces a little at the gesture, having not had such intimate contact in so long. Remus persists. His lips find their way slowly to a spot just above Sirius’ ear. They brush against an eyelid as they reach his slender nose. “Yes?” Remus asks Sirius, who has forgot he even began a sentence, who has forgotten everything but the feel of Remus’ arms around him and his lips moving about on his skin. Remus draws one of Sirius’ hands to his lips. “Do I still what?”

Sirius shuts his eyes tight as Remus pushed his lips firmly to his forehead. “Moony, do you still love me?”

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labarcelona October 20 2007, 00:04:08 UTC
*Gives you some tissues*

Remus answering the questions before Sirius even finishes them, just wonderful.
Thank you for mentioning that. Goodness, I was biting my nails about that part.

And quite like that paragraph, too. :)

Thank you for reading and commenting and liking it and everything. :D

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labarcelona October 20 2007, 06:44:01 UTC
*Grabs some tissues for you.*

I'm really happy to hear that this made a few of yours days a little brighter. :D That makes me all fuzzy inside. And thank you for the memory-ing. That makes me warm and fuzzy inside, too. :D

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justaidan October 20 2007, 01:22:35 UTC
I love protective!Remus.

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labarcelona October 20 2007, 06:45:32 UTC
Yay. :)

Thank you for reading.

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