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Dec 12, 2004 18:03

Broken and bruised
left hanging by the neuse
The lifeless object
just
swings with the breeze
hanging there
in the nearest tree
she climbed
up
tied it tight
kicked the ladder from beneath her feet
fell
there
snapped her neck
died in pain
which was nothing
compared to
the
pain she felt
day after day
minute after minute

They take
her down
to lie her in her final ( Read more... )

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sex_scorpion666 December 13 2004, 01:09:51 UTC
thats really good Dre. its sad, but its well written. its actually similar to a poem i wrote last year.. if i can find it id like to show it to you.

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stargzn_nemesis December 13 2004, 01:23:34 UTC
Thanks. I would totally love to see it. If you find it, you should post it and any other poetry you have in Socially!! :)

Also, I am going to take the application and put it on the userinfo page here, in a text box so people just have to simply copy and paste, if that is okay with you! I will put the code to bold the questions, so that it will be easier to read!

<3

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sex_scorpion666 December 13 2004, 01:32:10 UTC
yes! that would be awesome, i wanted to do exactly the same thing but i havent figured out how. so if you wanna that would rock!

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stargzn_nemesis December 13 2004, 01:37:23 UTC
I didn't find out until yesterday or the day before that. :) Someone left a comment to me in Socially, so I was like, HMM, I'll do this then!! :)

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