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Dec 03, 2006 13:05

It's poetry
how the sweat cools your back
and the scratch marks
and the bite on my neck
T.S Elliot
never knew anything like this.

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urbn_pirate December 3 2006, 12:47:55 UTC
oh.
to be you.

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labiapatrol December 3 2006, 18:55:36 UTC
haha, actually no.
I went home yesterday and a couple of hours later she fucked her ex :P
probably about the same time when I posted this..

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urbn_pirate December 4 2006, 11:05:00 UTC
oh, but that sucks. although I can't talk, that's what I've been doing. But I stopped.

Fucking exes means nothing. Try again in a couple of weeks, I say.

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labiapatrol December 4 2006, 23:40:22 UTC
haha, fucking her ex an hour or a half an hour after I left,
and after she got me fucking monogomous, yes it means something
but I haven't desised to try again left, the ball is in her ahnds so to speak, she has to proove she really fucking want me :) cause I'm that good :P

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laughingsnow December 4 2006, 17:07:44 UTC
well done.

Isn't amazing how some of the best poetry can be ruined by people's actions?

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labiapatrol December 5 2006, 00:03:52 UTC
haha, I know, sucks doesn't it :P
I still like the poem
the poem I wrote afterwards sucked
strange, cause usually it's the sad poetry that's better

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