Winterfest: Fairytale of Chicago, Part Two (Labyrinth/Dresden Files)

Jan 25, 2015 00:19

Title: Fairytale of Chicago, Part Two (Labyrinth/Dresden Files)
Rating: G
Summary: Chicago's only professional wizard has landed an invitation to the most prestigious event in the Underground: the Goblin Winter Ball. Underdressed and socially awkward, Harry needs a makeover, but who can take on such a herculean task?
Author's Note: A sequel of ( Read more... )

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haradachi January 25 2015, 13:17:39 UTC

I loved this. My favourite part was Harry describing how it feels to wear those tights,  ha ha. You do Butcher's voice so well yet it is still distinctively yours.

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dmacabre January 28 2015, 08:07:26 UTC
Thank you! :) I tried to think of the worst non-lethal thing Jareth could do to Harry... tights and a mullet just about fits the bill.

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3iggy January 25 2015, 14:25:47 UTC
That was wonderful! Your stories flow so well, and the imagery is always fantastic. I especially liked Jareth's interactions with Harry. Oh, and the epilogue was perfect. :)

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dmacabre January 28 2015, 08:08:29 UTC
Oh, thank you! Sometimes I've just worked on a fic too long and I've lost all perspective on whether or not it flows well, so I'm relieved to hear it. :-}

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apocryphal12 January 25 2015, 19:43:59 UTC
Peace and quiet! Priceless! (Especially in the Goblin Kingdom)

Harry's discomfort at the magical makeover was a delight to read. At least he didn't end up in heels. And I'm glad the Labyrinth is doing better with Sarah.

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dmacabre January 28 2015, 08:09:03 UTC
It's priceless everywhere, but especially the Goblin Kingdom. ;D

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jalenstrix January 25 2015, 23:23:46 UTC
ZOMG, so much love for this (just like part one). The tone is just right, and my heart squeed at the LotR and Narnia references. Also, the Labyrinth embodied is just spectacular. Also goblins skinny dipping in the punch bowl. Just sayin'.

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dmacabre January 28 2015, 08:11:38 UTC
Thank you. ;D I had fun imagining the Labyrinth as a person and trying to work in geeky references. Butcher is so much better at that, though!

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lilyonthebriar January 26 2015, 01:00:40 UTC
This is so great. Poor Harry, subjected to Jareth's fashion sense. (and hair!) I loved Jareth's need for complete control over the situation. Very surprised by the Labyrinth's reappearance, but the moment in the cave was beautiful.

Harry definitely chose the perfect gift for Sarah. And I loved being able to see a bit of Jareth and Sarah together at the end.

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dmacabre January 28 2015, 08:12:40 UTC
Thanks! I figured I had to throw in some J/S, otherwise it's more a Dresden Files fic than a Labyrinth one. :-}

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