Comments | lacey_loves_jno: Skylines and City Boys chapter seven.

lolz_loser in lacey_loves_jno

Skylines and City Boys chapter seven.

Oct 13, 2007 08:37

AUTHORS NOTES: Alright, this is closure. I'm not saying I'll never add more to it, when something hits me in a fit of inspiration, I'm just saying for the most part, accept this as the way things are, because it's the way things are in real life. The John Nolan lyrics I found after writing the story, and was amazed at how PERFECTLY they fit the ( Read more... )

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dejectedmadness October 13 2007, 19:08:14 UTC

That hurt my heart a lot. Jesse and John have to be together forever. Stupid Camille. Grah!

x_blackglitter October 14 2007, 01:13:44 UTC

Congratulations.
This chapter was amazing. =]
And oh-so fucking sad.
After I saw 'It Never Gets Easier' I read it with that playing.
And it does fit.
It's makes things much more emotional too.
I swear; I almost cried.

"So I'll keep it simple for obvious reasons,
And I'll say what I should and just hope you believe me, "

However; I believe that this can't be the end.
I'm not saying that they should be together.
It just shouldn't end like this.

I just hope more inspiration comes to you.

lolz_loser October 14 2007, 03:08:32 UTC

I do believe that John loves Jesse. And that a love like that can't stay burried. I would like to write some adulterous stuff, that will be fun.
=]

i_amjackscolon October 15 2007, 02:52:04 UTC

omgosh. that was amazing. =]

lolz_loser November 30 2007, 03:35:54 UTC

I realized i never replied to this, i guess.

thank you so, so much for reading. It means a lot =]

lindseylovestbs October 16 2007, 00:36:57 UTC

I really liked this ending.
It was kind of heartbreaking, but it just seemed so fitting. The perfect ending to the story.
-adding to memories-

lolz_loser October 17 2007, 00:32:01 UTC

thank you so much, this is the only way i can handle john being married. It seems to fit considering how close jesse and kevin are now, since john got married. It is heartbreaking, but I'm really glad you understand it. =]

xbedknobs November 29 2007, 22:07:10 UTC

oommph
That's the sound my heart made when I finished this.

lolz_loser November 30 2007, 01:25:37 UTC

aw. thank you, I know its like, so tragic. I cried when I wrote it.

xbedknobs November 30 2007, 02:20:55 UTC

It made my chest hurt. It was great.
I almost cried xD
It was really, really well-written. I could feel everything, from the heat to the rain to the disappointment when the Yankees lost [[and I don't even follow baseball]] to the heartbreak at the end, and I think you got Nolan and Lacey down pat.

lolz_loser November 30 2007, 03:08:16 UTC

wow, thank you, thank you, thank you.

i'm amazed. I know like, NOTHING about baseball, but i tried! people were like "i dont get it, how can that be" and i was like "THE STORY IS ABOUT LOVE! NOT YANKEES!"

but im so glad someone got it.

thank you so, so much for reading!!!!

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