Ficlet: Fruit-Flavored, Life on Mars

Mar 12, 2012 07:36

FRUIT-FLAVORED
Fandom: Life on Mars
Pairing: Sam/Gene (sort of)
Genre: Humor
Words: ~500
Rating: PG; minor language
Spoilers: None!
Notes: Originally posted to my tumblr back in November as a kneejerk response to a certain photo. Expect: Accidental Americanisms. Don't expect: Sense.

Summary: Sam buys Gene a drink. At a coffeeshop. In 2006.

It's small. )

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talkingtothesky March 12 2012, 19:09:44 UTC
GAH, this is TOO GOOD. Their voices, bloody hell. Absolutely definitely them. *hugs fic* *mems it*

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lacidiana March 12 2012, 23:00:37 UTC
Haha, I spied you reblogging this way back when, so thanks for that! ♥ I'm always so scared about messing their voices up horribly, so I'm glad to hear you liked them. 8D

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blueteak March 13 2012, 21:24:01 UTC
This is brilliant! "You said it was tall," Gene growled, an edge of violence to his tone that made the queue behind Sam collectively twitch and avert their eyes toward the register. I bet Gene makes lines move much faster.....

And oh, Sam: as if he didn't understand that in not-1970's-cop-program-inspired-Manchester, you kept your own bloody thoughts locked up neatly in your own bloody self.

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lacidiana March 13 2012, 23:12:37 UTC
LOL, we could use him around Christmas season, couldn't we? And I KNOW, Sam, baby, you poor emotionally repressed thing. 8((( Thanks so much for reading, as always! ♥

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lacidiana March 13 2012, 23:40:56 UTC
Aww, yay! It's a cracky little situation, so I'm relieved they still came across as themselves despite it. Thanks so much for reading and the kind words!

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thesmallhobbit March 13 2012, 21:36:10 UTC
This is great: Sam trying forlonely to persuade Gene to act normally (as in normal for 2006, not normal for Gene) when he himself feels utterly mad.

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lacidiana March 13 2012, 23:49:38 UTC
Haha, yes -- oh, Sam, the most delicious of hypocrites. ♥ Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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debl_ns March 13 2012, 22:18:20 UTC
This is wonderful, especially

"Right," Gene grated, acidly, "because two officers sharing a flat like Liberace's bandmates is normal," which, yes, okay, Sam admits that when he found Gene-sized loafers and trousers strewn across his closet like they belonged there, he'd nearly pissed himself. Again.

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lacidiana March 13 2012, 23:54:20 UTC
I have to admit, I'm rather fond of that line jsafks. Thank you for reading and for the kind words!

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