brigits flame week 1

Aug 04, 2008 20:24

She hoped they knew it wasn't their fault ( Read more... )

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psychrolute August 5 2008, 02:07:01 UTC
That was so dark and chilling. I especially loved "something porcelain and unforgiving" and the last line, great job. :]

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attentionhoard August 5 2008, 03:55:19 UTC
This is my favorite piece you've ever written. :)

This is excellent!

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honourable_fool August 5 2008, 05:32:53 UTC
"...like ghosts into a wall."

Oh! It gives me chills! Absolutely lovely! Lovely, dark and cold and full of broken dreams! It makes me want to cry.

Nice job! Good luck!

TTFN
Fool

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smz12231994 August 5 2008, 15:36:54 UTC
wow! So creepy!

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musicrocks987 August 5 2008, 16:34:06 UTC
Dark and creppy.
But awesome writing here!!!!
Very good job well done!

Best of Luck!

~MusicRocks987

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