August Week 1: Long, but a quick read (promise!)

[lacruciverbiste]

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Jeremy and Renee had been dating for a few months when he popped the question.

They were in Renee's dorm room one night; she was doing homework, and Jeremy was watching her from the bed.

"Honey?" he asked, shaking his shaggy blonde hair out of his eyes . Renee turned and leaned over the back of her chair, smiling at him.

"Yes, dear?" she

Comments

[transitiongodin]

Intense and wow.

[amri]

Wow. I was gripped by this. What an awesome entry. Good luck!

[lacruciverbiste]

thx for reading!

[mermaidbia]

Oooh, evil twin story. Good, carefully crafted work!

[lacruciverbiste]

thanks! and i'm glad to be back. can't wait to read yours. <3

[selkie_queen]

Very nice, I was greatly amused by the evil twin.