[fic] [Thrill Pair] [Chapters 5 -7] Impulse

[lady_androgene]

Title: Impulse
Pairing: Thrill Pair + a dash of AtoMo
Genre: mix of angst smut and fluff
Rating: This part, NC - 17
Disclaimer: Not Mine. Konomi Takeshi's.

Chapters 1 -4

Comments

[meiface]

:O WOW. No, first off, you're not late at all. ♥ Definitely still my birthday here and I'm wallowing in the joy of it all. Holy crap, I admire your preseverance in the face of losing 8000 freaking words. I would've cried and given up. That is evil to an unbelivable extent. ::hugs you for your effort:: And I have no problems with slutty Ryoma. XD In fact, I'm quite fond of him.

Okay. Okay. Um, I don't think I'm going to be able to manage much helpfulness in terms of a review. All I can saw is OHMYGOD I LOVE it. Longest Thrill Pair fic I've seen completed and it's beautiful and wonderful. The student-teacher porn was written beautifully and not with the kink it usually entails, but it's better this way 'cause it fits the fic. And uke!Fuji. OMG. UKE!FUJI. And aggressive!Ryoma. ♥ I heart madly. The entire thing makes me flail and squee and I love the ending and that they're finally finally finally together.

And omg, Atobe? Atobe with Momo. Atobe giving advice. Atobe you are my God. T^T

[lady_androgene]

I would've cried and given up.

Yeah well, I would've done the same, if this were just one of my out-of-whim fics. Since it isn't, I have to rough it. I'm a woman of my word and when I say I will write someone a birthday fic, and fortuitous events notwithstanding, I will write a birthday fic.^^

I'm thrilled to know that you love the fic. IT's basically the whole point of writing it in the first place. ^_____________^ Apart from, aiding you in your Thrill Pair smut movement.

UKE!FUJI.

I actually surprised myself with this, Ryoma-uke fanatic that I am. But then, since this fic is already breaking stereotypes, I might as well go all the way.

And omg, Atobe? Atobe with Momo. Atobe giving advice. Atobe you are my God. T^T

::squees:: I adore AtoMomo, even though my OTP is AtoRyo. Because Atobe is *just* OMNIPRETTY. Hehe.

::is glomped:: You're very much welcome. ^__________^

[meiface]

Oh but it's lovely. :D I won't attempt to persuade you to change your OTP (alas, I can't, for I too fall prey to its pretty snarkiness ;-;), but as long as occasionally there are wonderful things like this from you, I will be very happy. Hehe. ♥ Oh FujiRyo I love you. And you too, dear, thanks for all your hard work.

[intelligentdeus]

Oh, geez - Mei should have her birthday more often, if it compels you to write such lovely FujiRyo. This one makes me very, veeeerrrry, happy by the way. Angst has that effect on me. But you made them both -human-. Not the invincible tensai, and the irredeemable, snarky prodigy, but two people who make mistakes. They're both serious and IC, and it's so pretty, and your writing fits the mood.

<3 Happy, Happy!Deus

[lady_androgene]

Okay, I'm doing a rush reply coz the computer room's gonna close in five minutes so pardon any incoherencies.^^

Heh. Mei's bday is synonymous to FujiRyo day. XP

I'm thrilled to know that you approve of my characterizations, because I did the polar opposites of what they are usually portrayed (Fuji-stalker, Ryoma-commitmentphobe) ANd I'm also glad you like the style-- coz angst really isn't my thing although i've been writing it a lot lately for some perverted reason ^^;; .

Thanks so much for the insights! ::snugs::

[lady_androgene]

::gapes::

No, you are not incoherent at all. This review is the most detailed I've received yet. Thanks so much, I really appreciate it.

Y'see, I wrote this fic with the mindset of busting some stereotypes wide open-- specifically stereotypes of Fuji as a stalker, and Ryoma as this arrogant, commitment-phobic prick. And I'm really glad it worked, and that people who've read this fic thought it worked.

I'm kind of surprised to be informed that this fic could be the longest thrill pair fic there is. To think that I originally intended for this to be a one-shot! ^^ But I'm glad anyway, if I'm setting a record.

quality of writing persevere throughout this entire story

:: melts :: The quality was stable?!? YES! ::pumps fist:: I was actually worried about compromising said quality- especially when I had to rewrite most of it in a state of self-righteous rage. That and the fact that I had a deadline to meet.

especially when the angst you write?::blubbers:: Angst is so not my thing, give me crack ANYDAY, but for some god-knows-what

[lady_androgene]

Fuji as a hopeless romantic. ::le sigh:: I never realized that's essentially what I made him out to be here-- you know, barring all the wise professor crock. Haha, and I can't believe it worked on him. From sadistic stalker to hopeless romantic... Fuji's personality is as elastic Kaidoh's cycling shorts.

"I hate angst, I really do, but you made me like the angst you wrote! Shame on you! I hope you feel marginally guilty about that!"

EEEEE... OMG, you're right, this fic is a VIRUS. @__@ I am guilty beyond belief to be the propagator of such a loathsome disease. I swear I'll write crack the next time. :: remembers the OT5 she owes kasugai_gummie ::

Yup, definitely going back to crack after this one.

Now I jokingly call him my crack muse because he's turned out to be rather inspiring for someone who shares quite a few personality traits with concrete bricks.

YES, POKING TEZUKA IS FUN TO THE HUNDREDTH POWER. People should crack him up more. I'm so glad you did. RYOMA BLOWING... BUBBLEGUM TEZZIE. OMG, YOU KEEEELLLLEEED ME WITH THAT!!!

AtoRyo

[arctic_dragon]

OMG...
Ryo seme!!!!!
Fuji is so wise...the way to Ryoma's heart is through his body impulses.
Damn. That was such a good ending.
Absolutely adores it and pets it and wants to keep it for ever and ever.
:)

Loves it.

^__^

...nevermind my previous post...

[lady_androgene]

Fuji is so wise...the way to Ryoma's heart is through his body impulses.

Nyahahaha... is Ryoma the biggest slut of the century or what? Oh but I love him SOOOO much. ::squishes Ryoma-plushie ::

See, I told you I'd credit you! As if I'd forget something as important as that.^^

::snugs:: Thanks for loving it!

[forochel]

one hand swiftly grabbing Ryoma’s chin. “I was serious about you from the very start,” he whispered, blue eyes knife-like and smoldering.

...and many many others.

OMGSQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~ THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND THE LITTLE REFERENCES TO THRILL HERE AND THERE AND OMIGOD IT IS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL THRILL PAIR AND THE SMUT WAS LOVELY TOO AND OMG UKE!FUJI AND AGGRESSIVE!INSTINCTUAL!RYOMA!!!!

AND YOU ARE A HEROINE! Gods, you must have been so frustrated!! I know the feeling of losing something I worked my ass off for. Grah. And then receiving a really low grade for it when other people who didn't even bother to read the set texts get higher than me. RAWWR.

Anyway. THAT WAS SO DARNED LONG. IT IS LIKE TEH LONGEST THRILL PAIR FICCU I HAVE EVER READ AND IS ONE OF THE BEST. SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~

THE ENDING TOO WHEN IT RETURNS TO THE *THANG*. <3333333333333

[lady_androgene]

"OMG UKE!FUJI AND AGGRESSIVE!INSTINCTUAL!RYOMA!!!!"

::grins:: Like I said, break away from the usual facets.

"I know the feeling of losing something I worked my ass off for. Grah. And then receiving a really low grade for it when other people who didn't even bother to read the set texts get higher than me. RAWWR."

OMG, I know what you mean-- not just in terms of this fic, but in real life cases too. There are just too many fucked up things in life and that's one of the the worst lot.

"IT IS LIKE TEH LONGEST THRILL PAIR FICCU I HAVE EVER READ AND IS ONE OF THE BEST. SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~"

^______________^ I cannot really say how much I appreciate that comment so I'll just stick to the standard THANK YOU :: hearts and copulating colors ::