Comments | lady_darisa: FANFIC!! *gasp*

lady_darisa

FANFIC!! gasp

Feb 20, 2007 23:24

TITLE: The Bet

FANDOM: CSI: Miami

PAIRING: Ryan/Eric

RATING: NC-17, FRAO

WARNINGS: Slash…graphic sex…gambling…very bad language…masturbation

SUMMARY: An officer wins a bet and gets a free show in the process.

AUTHOR’S NOTES: This is my first fanfic for this fandom, my first slash, and my first lemon. Be nice?

This story is dedicated to ( Read more... )

Comments 27

shadowfax27 February 21 2007, 05:27:47 UTC

Wow! You dedicated this to me??!? Hot damn, thanks, girlie! *huggles you to the ground* You've no idea how much this had me grinning and blushing like a schoolgirl. XD If only I were as lucky as Leyah and had those pics myself... but this would do just fine for a fan-girl's wet dream. ^_~ Thank you, thank you, thank you!

lady_darisa February 21 2007, 05:30:06 UTC

^_~ Thought you would like it.

I kinda made Leyah after me, and she's gonna be in alotta PWPs when I write more. She's just gonna be a bystander, though.

So I guess the story was good?

alligator138 February 21 2007, 09:15:22 UTC

What I wouldn't give for a picture like that! Mmmmm. *is lost for words* @_@

lady_darisa February 21 2007, 16:02:46 UTC

I KNOW! If only someone that read this could draw....*pokes all readers*

alligator138 February 21 2007, 16:09:47 UTC

I would suggest that you poke Gnome... I've forgotten her number. She's on my friends list if you want to contact her. She did a very pretty picture or two to go with a scene in Mr September. They're in my memories if you want a look.

hobbits_friend February 21 2007, 09:38:54 UTC

I wish I was Leyah... ;)
A bit too PWP for my tastes, but a nice story! :)
Do you mind if I correct your German sentences?
I love being inside you. - Ich liebe es, in dir zu sein.
You were made for me. - Du bist für mich geschaffen worden.
So hot and tight. - So heiß und eng.

lady_darisa February 21 2007, 15:56:51 UTC

Yeah, she is one lucky woman XD
I'm gonna try and tie in other stories with it...hopefully.
I can try to fix the German, but the LJ cut isn't cooperating with me. T_T

Thanks for the review!

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lady_darisa February 21 2007, 16:04:44 UTC

It's a fangirl's dream. Too bad it ain't cannon XD

ebonymist February 21 2007, 15:07:41 UTC

Guh.... Wow, that's hot! I'd love to have those pics! ;)

lady_darisa February 21 2007, 16:16:35 UTC

Sweetheart, we may just get them <3