Possession 5/5

[lady_deathangel]

Jon and Brendon were avoiding each other and if that wasn’t awkward enough, being greeted by the sight of a blonde head bent between slim legs encased in skinny jeans in an uncomfortable position that was the picture of dejection on his couch was disturbingly surreal. Ryan stopped short in the doorway and then cleared his throat. The girl’s head

Comments

[o4fuxache]

I guess I'll comment though I've already accosted you through AIM about how much I adored this fic. :)

It was just SWEET and funny and easy to read and I loved the personalities and sure sometimes I wanted to slap Ryan but they are such boys and I love them.

Lovely.

[bloodygoodgirl]

Oh my gosh hon this is awesome! Like really wow. I loved it so much and you should be so happy all your hard work paid off cause it's an awesome piece.

[untappedbeauty]

*sighs*

I've been wanting to read Spencer/Ryan lately, and this was just exactly the right thing for that craving. You display such a wonderful touch for portraying the different relationships between the characters; every friendship or relationship has its own distinct feel that rings true with your plot. The Pete/Ryan in particular just made me ache because it was clear that there'd been promise there, that there could have been an amazing friendship until things got twisted and went wrong.

And OH, but I am floored by what you did with Ashlee. Yes, she was defensive and bitchy, but THEN she was crumbling and sympathetic and I felt bad for her and hoped for the best for her.

There were so many parts that made my heart clench, chief among them Brendon coming to Spencer and Ryan after he kissed Jon and thought he'd ruined everything. OH MY HEART! Brendon being sad makes me sad, too. It's like, a rule!

I really immensely enjoyed this. I love a fic that takes me on an emotional ride, and this one did that wonderfully. Amazing

[arsenicjade]

This was so beautiful. I particularly liked the way you resolved things between Pete and Ryan, that Ryan had the courage to face him, and the maturity to recognize him as human, with all the failings inherent. And Jon and his willingness to just go there for Brendon's friends, even though he doesn't really know them, even though they've just shown back up in his life. All your characterizations here are so vivid and wonderful, and I just love every second of it.

[followand_feel]

Words cannot truly express my emotions right now.
That was beautiful in every way.