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[lady_domino]

I danced in the rain today...
An bicycled in the dark, with drops in my eyes

and wrote this:

The marble can not hold

The ideal woman: that was me.
Childhood stories of Faith, Hope and Chastity.
All those things you stole from me.
I gave you my Chastity.

The cracks are appearing, thin and cold

And with that you took Hope too.
For I knew I could not marry

Comments

[shaitanah]

You know what I think of Bella. But this is so beautiful, so sad, so heartbreaking that I might as well try and change my POV. It would go well with some slow eerie music, something you can dance to and drink to. ;)

[lady_domino]

Yes, i can def see her drinking in this frame of mind :P
thanx, glad u like
personally i find bellatrix a brilliant chractar, but tis all a matter of personal taste

[dune_master]

I officially love this! Despite the fact that I can barely remember who Bellatrix is.

[lady_domino]

hehe
thanx anyway then
Bellatrix is a female fanatical deatheater

[dune_master]

Yeah, thanks, I remember THAT!))) I’ve already refreshed my memory. You know soon I’ll love her too if it’s right that Helena Bonham Carter plays her part.

[lady_domino]

hopefully
she's a gd actress, so fingers crossed

[mizstorge]

The scales are stuck, and my heart is pinned...

Dark and evocative!

I hope you don't mind that I friended you. I recced your fic "Snake Tears" on my LJ, and at the S.S. Sssssss, Fiction Alley's Tom/Harry ship discussion.

[lady_domino]

heh, no problem
glad you liked snake tears - although i personally think its not my best...