So, there's this thing of beauty (ok, slightly cracky beauty, but beauty nevertheless) called the
Sherlock Holmes kink meme. Which anyone so inclined should check out, because there are literally thousands of prompts waiting to be filled.
Anyhow: Someone requested fic based on Neil Gaiman's short story A Study in Emerald, of which I'm a longtime
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Anyway, I've been saving this to read once I had some free time and it didn't disappoint - it's sad, powerful and atmospheric and I thought you got the narrrative voice spot on. Aside from seeing Holmes and Watson's goodbye and final stand, I liked the idea of the narrator and his friend as Holmes and Watson's shadows and the implication from Holmes (sorry, Vernet) that they'd be lost without their counterparts bringning meaning to their lives.
I also enjoyed the brief glimpse of Irene Adler onstage - it brought to mind Tipping the Velvet (I recently watched the BBC adaptation) and I see from the above comment that was the inspiration, which is cool. :)
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Thank you for stopping by to read and leave feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the idea of Holmes and Watson as shadows of the narrator and his friend; in Gaiman's story, I always thought that this was somehow implied because of the role reversal which makes Vernet and the Limping Doctor criminals (at least from the narrator's point of view), so I was interested in highlighting it a bit. And Irene just sort of appeared on the stage when I started writing, so I couldn't cast her out. ;)
Thanks again, it was very kind of you to let me know what you thought of the story!
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Even after all this time, I hesitate to describe what I saw, but in the interests of verisimilitude and integrity, I feel I must proceed.
Oh, you capture his voice so well even in the face of something neither Doyle nor Gaiman would deal with. I love how he uses Old One-sort of imagery for their lovemaking, as if his submerged fear of the royalty is played out onto his repulsion/attraction for the coupling.
They still seemed entirely focused on each other. But then Vernet's fingers slipped swiftly into his partner's pocket, and before I regained my composure, he was pointing a gun at me.
And oh, how I loved that, the way they're so cool and so ready for anything. And maybe that should have warned me, but I still felt totally gut-punched:
Their last stand, their last chance. Their final farewell to each other.And teared up at this. It fits the desperation of the AU so well, I love how you captured so much that Moran simply cannot process here and give it to us like a ( ... )
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Secondly: thank you for the insightful feedback! It's always a challenge to use a canon-like voice believably when describing things that the canon does not include, so I'm particularly happy that that worked for you.
A Study in Emerald is a dark story set in a dark universe, so I could not end this any other way. I'm fascinated by the parallels between Moriarty and Moran and Holmes and Watson, which made me wonder what it would mean for the former two if the latter two ceased to exist.
Yet one fun thing about writing these characters is that they're basically Victorian superheroes; for almost anyone else it would seem out of character to be so alert to everything that is going on, but not for them. I think Holmes and Watson may even have survived somehow.
Thank you again for the lovely and thoughtful comments! :)
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