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[lady_flamewing]

I balked a little at posting this one - it draws really heavily on people I know IRL, and it...may not portray them in the most flattering light. And they'll know who they are, too. So...I'm just hoping no one who provided the inspiration for these characters will take offense at the way they are portrayed - because that was the point of all this,

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[authoressarktos]

Wow. I just. WOW.

...Nicely done. It feels like someone sucker punched me in the gut, and that's always a good sign where writing's concerned. The only thing I wish I had was the context, but other than that, boy was this effective and an interesting study of human nature. I'm sure everyone knows people who remind them of Anna, Robb and Will; I know I do. But seeing how everything played out is just tragic, especially since you can and can't blame them for what they did. Very emotional.

[lady_flamewing]

Thank you. So much. I always really like to hear that my pieces have had emotional impact, because that's really what I aim for - especially with things like this.