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lady_hanaka

What Doesn't Kill You / Side Story: Leeteuk

Nov 05, 2011 11:31

Title: What Doesn't Kill You / Side Story: Leeteuk
Genre: Superhero AU, action
Rating: PG-13

Chapter 12 < ----- > Chapter 13
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His name was Park Jungsu. He had craters for dimples and an infectious laugh that bordered on maniacal. He was a highschooler that cared more about confessing to the girl in Class 3-B than grades or his future. Park Jungsu was ( Read more... )

fanfiction, band:super junior, character:xmas, character:typhoon, character:donghae, band:trax, character:shindong, title:what doesn't kill you makes you st, character:heechul, character:leeteuk, character:attack, character:rose

Comments 49

I knew they were fucking. haiiro_ai November 5 2011, 21:33:45 UTC

Waaaaaah~

Re: I knew they were fucking. haiiro_ai November 5 2011, 22:12:49 UTC

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Re: I knew they were fucking. lady_hanaka November 5 2011, 22:31:52 UTC

Yes, Leeteuk is lucky. Almost as lucky as Typhoon is to tap that. But so far, only Hankyung is as lucky as that. XD

Re: I knew they were fucking. haiiro_ai November 6 2011, 00:45:45 UTC

Is your life terribly stressful and pessimistic at the time being? Because I feel as though you have a very adamant stance on making this story with as little happy endings as can be. PLEASE DON'T KILL HANGENG. And that makes me sad. Makes me feel as though the ending will make me cry for a long time. PLEASE DEAR SHISUS DON'T KILL HANGENG. Not that I haven't already cried at parts of this story, because I have. DON'T KILL KYUHYUN EITHER. You have a gift for writing things that truly strike deep inside of people, the only one of which I can vouch for being myself. OH MAN PLEASE DON'T KILL KYUHYUN. Unfortunately the universe that this story is set in is a savage and merciless one, which tends to reap only angst from the character seeds it sows in the carefully tilled plotline. I'M SHAMELESSLY BEGGING FOR THE LIVES OF MY BIASES. Well, rest assured that whatever the outcome, I will always like this story. You always write beautifully.

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This sucks cereal_strawz November 5 2011, 22:36:51 UTC

You are the worst writer ever. I don't even know why I continue reading. I can't stand this story.

I don't even like Super Junior. They can't sing. Or dance. Especially Sungmin.

This is so unrealistic. And I caught like two typos.
Just stop writing. Stop.

You cut stuff out didn't you? I could tell. It was so obvious. That's probably why it was so incredibly short. I don't understand how someone could post this and attempt to pass it off as a legitimate chapter.

No substance.

The only redeeming quality of this filth is that the fat man died.
Stop writing you hipster-freak.

Re: This sucks lady_hanaka November 5 2011, 22:41:33 UTC

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Re: This sucks cereal_strawz November 5 2011, 22:42:41 UTC

Not yet, I haven't.

Re: This sucks lady_hanaka November 5 2011, 22:44:23 UTC

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Thread 13

astormisbrewing November 5 2011, 22:59:17 UTC

I got the fluttery-heartwarmy-bubbly feeling, but I didn't cry. I just kind of feel like hugging someone. There seem to be so few happy endings in this story, that I'm just latching onto whatever ones are sort of almost kind of there but not quite happy, and calling it happy. I think that's as happy as its ever going to be, so man, I am running with it.

lady_hanaka November 5 2011, 23:37:25 UTC

I think you chose wisely there. The almost happy moments, remember them, for they will be gone. They shall be so so so so gone soon...maybe they'll happen again, but I don't think so.

viridian_blue5 November 6 2011, 06:47:59 UTC

LEETEUK'S SIDE STORY /flails/

I love the way you wrote his character and how he just wants to be acknowledged... <3 The Heechul/Leeteuk relationship is (Y). :D Although I can't really imagine Heechul calling ANYONE, much less Leeteuk, 'hyung', but no complaints there. XD

Thanks so much for writing! /sends candy/

lady_hanaka November 6 2011, 14:08:41 UTC

:D I'm glad you liked it. Yes, Teukie just wanted to be acknowledged and loved.

Heechul is a nice mixture of contradictions. He's always going on about how you should respect your elders but he fails to acknowledge them himself. It had to slip sometime. Haha.

paradigm_twist November 6 2011, 09:25:39 UTC

Is it sad that I sometimes feel like Leeteuk thinks that way in RL? Like he's so worried about people forgetting them :/ But LOL-ing at everyone's side story revolving around Heechul. He's such an enigma :D The TeukChul relationship is strangely fragile. So many conflicts, yet there's still this trust and respect for each other.

@___@ So just how exactly did Typhoon did it with Heechul? Interesting thought: so did they break up by the time Geng showed up at the training center? Hmm....

But xD Why exactly does Donghae's introduction to the new people always start off as "I'm Donghae and I can turn into XX animal. Wanna see?" *pinches cheeks* So cute. Which makes me .____. at his story when he's going to break T___________T

Too absorbed with this story. You throw a lot of curve balls LOL

Waiting on your next update ^^

lady_hanaka November 6 2011, 14:11:05 UTC

Yeah, I feel the same about Teukie. It's kind of why I added that but in. I think he really does worry about that, and is always trying to please people because of it.

:D Donghae's side story...>.< Ah, so much left to write. And Then Heechul's and everyone else's...aish!

Well, Hangeng has had sex with Heechul before. Just as long as there are no hands and no lips involved on Heechul's side, it works. But were they still going out when Heechul met Hannie? Only *I* know the answer to that. Muwahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!