Well I completed the first chapter of my first story and I'm so-so about it. Reading it again I'm thinking too much dialogue and not enough action... I don't know it jsut feels a bit stilted or something. Anyway I'll keep that inmind while I'm writing the next chapter and see how it goes. I've been reading fanfiction forever and have been so
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