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somer August 19 2012, 13:22:06 UTC
OH MY GOD!!! This calls 'FAVORITE', I'll definitely put it in my file for favorite stories.

Jensen being that shy and sweet heavyweight of a dragon and who made other dragons already uneasy although he is only five (awww, that scene in the intro was so cute).

And Jared being that possessive, protective dragonrider.

Loved all the secondary characters, especially Chris, this huge dragon with the even bigger heart.

Loved the setting and when Morgan speaks this last words “That is why I am able to announce to you today, once and for all time, you are dismissed!”, I had so much goosebumps and this is always the point where I know this story was worth every word!!

THE SEX!! God damn. Toppy bastard Jared making Jensen come and come and come to mate him properly, then that possessive sex in the tent, the urgent sex in the woods. Holy damn, very scorching scenes!

I LOVED IT :D Thank you for writing such a fantastic story!!!

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lady_krystal_79 August 27 2012, 11:09:59 UTC
Sorry I took so long to reply (I was on holiday). That is quite the sparkling review! Thank you so much for all your kind words. :-)

Yeah, toppy Jared kind of happened by accident - I didn't originally see him that way, he just...was. LOL Glad you enjoyed the scenes. ;-)

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mandraco August 21 2012, 09:43:06 UTC
This was a really interesting story and I enjoyed reading it. Loved the whole atmosphere of the fic and the dragons.

I'm especially fond of these latter interludes, but that might just be because they're at the forefront of my mind. =)

Great story!

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lady_krystal_79 August 27 2012, 11:15:53 UTC
Thank you. :-) The interludes were parts of the story I had kind of imagined but didn't want to add into the larger story, so I'm glad you enjoyed them.

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nukefan55 August 22 2012, 03:35:37 UTC
This was awesome. Read it in one day!

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lady_krystal_79 August 27 2012, 11:05:53 UTC
Thank you! That was quite the feat! LOL

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z3s_keep_going August 28 2012, 18:33:17 UTC
i just finished all of this fic and i loove it! you did an incredible job creating this world for the boys and dragons! i love that you didn't just use jensen's power as a royal as a fix,

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lady_krystal_79 August 28 2012, 23:20:33 UTC
It would have been too easy, right? The immediate inclination is to just have him 'order' the war to end, but that is giving one person (or two, in this case) too much power, so I wanted to temper it with their consciences. I'm glad people agree with this approach! Thank you for the lovely review. :-)

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lady_krystal_79 September 5 2012, 11:35:17 UTC
LOL - thank you for your enthusiasm! And your icon is verrrrrry appropriate. :-)

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