JOHN WINCHESTER GOES SMALL

May 06, 2012 21:16


Title:  JOHN WINCHESTER GOES SMALL

Author:  Lady M

Characters: John, Dean, Sam, Bobby

Scenario:  Dean spanks John

Implements:  Hand.

Rating:  PG-13 for spanking and mild swearing.

Warning:  Parental spanking of minors.  Please don't read if it offends you.

Disclaimer:  Eric Kripke and the CW own all.  I own nothing.

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pixiemagic78 May 7 2012, 01:48:42 UTC
This is the frist story I have read with a de-aged John, I love the idea. This is an amazing start, I can't wait to find out what happens nest. Little John is a handful, and adorable. I have a feeling John is going to pay the boys back for the trouble they caused as kids.

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lady_m_319 May 7 2012, 02:12:57 UTC
Glad to hear you like the idea. I wasn't sure if I was going to end it here or have an open ending. Now I'm glad I left the door open for future fics. I'm with you, I expect Little John will give the boys a run for their money, now and when he gets back to full size. Thanks for the encouragement.

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trumansshell May 7 2012, 03:12:42 UTC
Loved it and I hope you don’t end it there :)

I loved when Dean asked John if this was payback for everything they did wrong as a kid. I also liked how Dean rationalized with his father before giving him the spanking. My guess is that if Dad remembers, it might save Dean's butt for spanking him (or having a meeting of the minds).

Sammy's reaction to everything was great :)

Awesome and I can't wait for more :)

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lady_m_319 May 7 2012, 03:57:30 UTC
Thanks! Yeah, Dean thought hard on his decision. But Dean's meeting of the minds ended up being a little painful for Little John. From John holding back from slapping Dean it would appear the spanking was the right approach. Time will tell what John remembers when he gets fixed, or what he admits to remembering...teehee. Glad you liked.

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brassband777 May 7 2012, 08:36:01 UTC
That's a good point - will he admit to remembering even if he does? Lol. Sounds like Sammy's butt will be toast though as he's the cause of this ;)

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lady_m_319 May 8 2012, 02:31:44 UTC
Toast! That's an accurate way of putting it. Something to look forward to.

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winchesterlove2 May 7 2012, 08:17:08 UTC
i do hope you have more for the future! this is only the 2nd deaged john story i've ever read and i think they're a beautiful rarity.

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lady_m_319 May 8 2012, 02:42:06 UTC
Thanks for the encouragement. I was afraid John de-age wouldn't be received well. As you said they're a rarity. I expect Little John will be reeking havoc in the future.

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brassband777 May 7 2012, 08:32:51 UTC
I was so excited to see a story off you, as I loved your others :D
I'm addicted to de-aged fics and this one was BRILLIANT!
I could just picture little John from the way you described him - he was adorable! (besides being very naughty. hee hee). You got Dean spot-on - family is the centre of his universe and of course it's his job to look after them. Loved the comparisons/memories of Dean spanking Sam when he was younger. I did feel sorry for Sam and Dean, because being in a position of authority over their father would definitey be incredibly difficult for them.
'John responds to Dean’s affirmation. He kicks him in the shin.' - Ha ha ha ha....brilliant!
It was really cute how John thought better of slapping Dean after the spanking and that he wanted to go to Sam.
I adored this!!! Any chance of a sequel???????

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lady_m_319 May 8 2012, 02:53:01 UTC
Thanks for your great comment. John was pretty naughty and Dean and Sam had to walk the line between being sons and now acting as parents. More responsibility fell on Dean, as it always has, to protect the family. He was reluctant but knew he had to take charge, and did.

Yeah, Little John can be strong willed and stubborn but he's not stupid. When he didn't like what Dean was telling him he kicked him. But after the spanking he thought twice about slapping him.

I expect Little John to show up in future fics. Thanks for asking!

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brassband777 May 9 2012, 17:04:03 UTC
I should have been more specific.....hee hee.....I wouldn't like just one sequel, I'd like lots and lots of sequels!!!! Lol. I totally adored your de-aged John :D And the interactions of him with Sam and Dean had me in stitches ;)

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lady_m_319 May 9 2012, 22:37:45 UTC
So I guess you don't want me to cure John too quickly? I'll see what I can do about the lots and lots but the muse is a fickled sort. Stitches? That's great to know that the fic caused that type of reaction. Thanks!!!

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ficwriterjet May 7 2012, 14:14:33 UTC
I thought this was great. :) It's an idea I haven't seen any stories like this before with De-aged John. I liked the way the boys kept calling him 'Dad' even while they were trying to get him to behave. LOL

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lady_m_319 May 8 2012, 03:03:11 UTC
Thanks! I don't think I've see any others with de-aged John. Maybe more will pop up. The John/Dad name choice is just a little comedy to toss in in the middle of the supernatural dilemma. Glad you liked it.

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