untitled H50

Mar 16, 2011 01:28

Title: untitled
Author: LadyMacbeth
Genre/Pairing: Gen, can be seen a Steve/Danno preslash
Rating: PG-13 (for language)
Word Count: 500
Warnings None
Disclaimer: “Hawaii Five-O” and its characters belong to people who are very much not me.
Summary: “Only you could turn a Tuesday afternoon into such a clusterfuck.”
Note: My first foray into the H50 ( Read more... )

steve/danno, h50, fanfiction

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Comments 21

siehn March 16 2011, 05:35:11 UTC
Oh, oh, I love this!

Good job on your first foray into the fandom! I definitely hope to see more from you.

I especially like your Steve-voice, and that last line just kills me. Also, lol because Steve WOULD scare a poor lady into labor. He's such a psycho, but we all love him anyway.

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lady_macbeth_13 March 16 2011, 20:01:17 UTC
Heh, I think we love Steve because he's such a psycho.

Thanks so much for the review. I'm always nervous about the first post in a new fandom.

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sgflutegirl March 16 2011, 05:41:08 UTC
Awww... so adorable. Love this. Great first H50 fic.

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lady_macbeth_13 March 16 2011, 20:02:17 UTC
Thanks so much. :D

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galadriel34 March 16 2011, 06:24:03 UTC
absolutely lovely :) Great fic, I hope, you'll write more :)

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lady_macbeth_13 March 16 2011, 20:03:16 UTC
Thank you! And definitely. This show has got its hooks into me.

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fuflowers March 16 2011, 07:12:57 UTC
So sweet.
Babies and hot guys are an awesome combo in any story!

First in Five-0, huh? Nice start. Can't wait to see more!

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lady_macbeth_13 March 16 2011, 20:06:24 UTC
I just loved the idea of Steve having a panic attack as a result of being handed a baby.

Thanks for commenting!

(And yes, Baby + Hot Guy = Win)

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samjohnsson March 16 2011, 08:42:45 UTC
Well come, indeed! Adored how you portrayed the emotions!

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lady_macbeth_13 March 16 2011, 20:08:17 UTC
Thanks! I was pretty nervous, it being my first H50 fic. There are so many amazing stories already out there. I was terrified I was going to completely mangle the character.

Thanks so much for the kind words. :)

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