[Fanfic] In the Dark {Chapter 10: Temptations}
FINALLY!! Yes I know xD
Title: In The Dark {Chpt. 10: Temptations}
Author: Roxy (lady_monochrome)
Pairing(s): MinJae, YunJae, YooSu, HoSu, Yunho x Boa
Length: Chapter 10 of 15
Word Count: 7,355
Genre: AU, Drama, Mystery, Suspense, Psychological
Rating: R
Warning(s): Serial murder, explicit crime scenes, fucked up sociopathic individuals, drug abuse ( Read more... )
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I want to huggle Jaejoong so badly!!!
I'm so afraid for all of them.
Bad Yunho! *smacks him*
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Yeah! Smack that bad man >D Though I can't promise he won't like it.
Thank you for the feedback and allover for commenting ^_^
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And gosh it seems Min's nightmares has just begin...
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Min... he's going to need all his strength for the last five chapters.
Thanks for reading and commenting =D makes me happeh!
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*grins* I'm glad you're back with updates ^^
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Gonna comment tomorrow, I'm studying bb!
btw....where is my spotto u evil woman! xD haha kidding!
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Happy studying hun~~~ *smooch*
PS: Your spotto went to hell a billion chapters ago 'cause I'm that lazy xD
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Don't worry, I've been a pretty bad commenter too...
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Seriously...at some point I started biting my nails~
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The office when Yunho came in was so real to me, you portrayed and described the scene so well that .... I also felt my mood boiling along with Changmin.And Yunho! He is such an asshole and he sure knows what is he doing, HE'S FUCKING EVERYWHERE.....LIKE A PLAGUE.
And woman!
Changmin...is this,but like this close to finally resolve this case and in that same moment something happened to those motherfucking shoes! JESUS FUCKING CHRIST! Do you want me to smack you when I SEE YOU OR WHAT!
I can't help but wonder....what is going to happen now!
This is definitely for me one of the chapters I truly enjoyed the most!
You better update fast! There is NO excuse now! :D
JANE! ROXA CHAN
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So many things I wanna say, I don't know where to start. So well it's going to be in a mess *sorry* ^^!
1rst: pissed off Changmin, don't ask me why, but SEXY!! *yeah really don't ask me why* XD
2nd: Your description of Yunho while in Changmin's office, playing with the detective's nerves = PERFECT! I so wanted to punch/slap/kick/stab him the whole time! and it was easy to get into Changmin shoes trying his utmost best not to retaliate too much. ^^;
3rd: “Don’t get too cocky senator. You’re not our governor yet.” Changmin couldn’t help it. The words simply splurged out of his mouth. ---> THANK YOU! ^__^
“None of your business Chun. Don’t be such a drama queen.”
“Me the drama queen? Are you fucking kidding me?” No one needed to mingle more than an hour around the two of them before they noticed who the true king of drama was. ---> LMAO! and couldn't stop myself picturing Junsu being very serious while saying that ( ... )
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1st: There's not even a reason why I should ask. Pissed off Min is sex period.
2nd: Omo!! Thank you so much!! *bows* I'm glad the feeling of the scene reached you! I must be doing something right hehehe
3rd: You're oh so very welcome!!! xD Someone had to tell him!
LOL!!! I imagined Su exactly the same way!! Being extremely serious about it. And the JJ+Ae+Boa relationship was definteily something I wanted to highlight in this chapter. I felt like Aeyoung was more of an abstract idea in the fic so I wanted to give her more participation ^_^ Glad you liked it!
YOU'RE SO VERY WELCOME!! Being a writer is a beautiful thing especially with awesome readers like yourself. Thanks for the support. I'll work hard to bring out the next update soon.
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