[Fanfic] In the Dark {Chapter 11: Ground Zero}

[lady_monochrome]

Title: In The Dark {Chpt. 11: Ground Zero}
Author: Roxy (lady_monochrome)
Pairing(s): MinJae, YunJae, YooSu, HoSu, Yunho x Boa
Length: Chapter 11 of 15
Word Count: 9,389
Genre: AU, Drama, Mystery, Suspense, Psychological
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): Serial murder, explicit crime scenes, fucked up sociopathic individuals, drug abuse and prostitution.

Summary:

Comments

[rj_band_nerd]

I enjoyed reading this. Glad to hear you have a peace of mind. Those things you have gone through sound tough but I'm happy things have gotten better. I wish you the best *hugs*

[lady_monochrome]

I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Thank you so much for your nice wishes ^_^ I'll keep them in a jar so I don't lose them *hugs back*

[toni_luv]

Damn! The man left little baits to take and he took them and went according to his leverage blackmail plans to get this guy off his dark night life. This is so damn crazy! I've been craving for something to read! And you answered my prayers!!! Just one simple question is Junsu even on Yoochun's side or did he plant the recording device under Yunho's request or Yunho planted it long time ago to get his own thrilling kinks off watching other dancers and other things go on in the VIP room? Changmin has hard evidence from Yunho's shoes. Yunho sees 'em notice 'em missing from the room which he neglected and other evidence he forgotten about ear ring what Changmin took and recognized it's one of the lotus victims. Yes! Jae returned to earth all it took was a few slaps from his sister in his dreams...way to go to the sis! What in the world would Changmin do now? Throw away his career and try to protect Jae from what's to come when life would batter them down... ? What will happen to them now

[lady_monochrome]

Wow!! xD So much! lol But I guess I did pile in a lot of stuff in this chapter O__O I had to stop myself from adding even more (which had already been outlined to be in this chapter but then I realized it would be much too overbearing

[toni_luv]

Okay, that part Yunho having people watch over Boa like a hawk I remember.. Eyes are everywhere now cue in that creepy sound voice. "We - are - watching you.."
Oh no no. I simply enjoy the stuffed chapter of complicating things. :P
Ah, yes. *mentally hits head* Forgotten Junsu's mind. His scramble feelings and what not.. Yoochun trying to keep Junsu level minded if it were possible at times. But it's simply true what Yoochun said about the come and go of people into their lives yet those two always end up together. The self question to Junsu himself is will he be able to get rid of Yunho out of his life, could get rid of that danger feel from Yunho that gives him the thrill drug that was his?
Yup Changmin can tell he's close on nailing it... the hard evidence he finds, the harder the suspect will make things more difficult.
in other words fix the screws back in place and start thinking more clearly! set the gear in right and get moving!

Hell lady I'm so damn happy you updated! =D *hugs* Can't wait for the next chapters. =)

[lady_monochrome]

Hahahahaha! Totally. A movie comes to mind "Eagle Eye" that's how Yunho is, I wouldn't be surprised if he has a computer for a brain....

We'll see how Junsu will deal with his promise to Chun, let's cross our fingers xD And Changmin better be on his tippy-toes the closer he gets to making an arrest.

*huggles and huggles* I really want to post the next chapter in good time. I hope I do. (It's sad how I can barely control that lol)

[ekkusuchan]

how come this update didn't appear in my inbox >_>
be right back after school to finish reading the second half ^o^

[lady_monochrome]

Maybe 'cause I posted it private at first...? I do that while I get everything ready for posting.

Can't wait to read you feedback 8D Have fun in school!!

[ekkusuchan]

oh no when it seemed like they're moving a step closer to catchig yunho, he does something that put him 2 steps away from them >o< now yunho probably has blackmail material of both jaejoong and changmin! no wonder he's a mayor candidate >_> slick, slick politician... take care of yourself, changmin >o<

i'm sorry to hear about your family condition v_v i hope you're okay and coping well...

[lady_monochrome]

I know right?! Yunho... Yunho... >_> Sometimes I surprise myself when I'm writing his devious ways. >D hehehehe I wonder if the psycho is me O_O *tense music*

Hahahahaha Changmin is going to have to sleep with an eye open from now on.

And thank you for the support. I'm doing better and seeing all you my lovely readers makes me feel even better. *huggles* I hope to write the next chapter in a timely manner. But you might see a few one-shots from me going around since they're already in the making >D

[irene014]

Ah i miss this story~! I'm so glad to see an update :]
Be back, doing some late night cramming >_

[lady_monochrome]

Study hard!! This will be waiting here for you *polishes your spot*

[irene014]

WOW, I'm so late ._. haha i claim this spot xD
MinJae dynamics are getting stronger & yay public!sex :D
FUUUUUUUU! Yunho, you always ruin shit up man. I feel so sorry for Changmin, he needs to deal with a lot of stress lately... poor bb
Yoochun is officially one of my favorite characters in this fic. he has a cold aura to him, but is surprisingly caring and loving man ;]
UGH SO MANY UNANSWERED QUESTIONS RN, lol can't wait for the next chapter to clear things up ^^

I'm glad you're back :) I really admire you for writing this fic seriously, managing to write it with all the difficulties that you'd faced in your life lately. I wish you luck with your studies  ^_^

[ekin_hardy]

One hell awesome chapter!
jaemin,jaemin!public sex is a no-no when ur in the middle of murder investigation.but hell yeah to public smut!
yet,another murder...hurm,hope the main cast wont get hurt in this story...lol,really hope this fic is filmed and played by tvxq..

P.S Hope life will cntinue getting better for u...wish u all da best!

[lady_monochrome]

HAhahahahaha we agree with Top then. It was careless, very careless. But no use beating a dead horse. They have to face the consequences now.

That would be awesome if they made a movie of this *O* Although I doubt JaeMin will want to play their characters. . . especially after seeing this scene xD

Aaww thanks for the lovely support. I feel so much better just reading all the comments and I just came back from a very good Japanese class. Feels good to be alive at moments like these ^_^