Fanfiction: Back to You (Part II)

[lady_sb]

Prompt: (#2) The Audience from 30_lemons, table found here

A/N:Greetings everyone :) Firstly for all of those who read the first part and commented, thank you SO very much. That really made my day and I'm really happy that so many of you enjoyed it. I must apologise for taking longer than I expected with this part, but didn't have a great weekend but all

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[lady_sb]

fingers crossed! ^_^ thanks for commenting

[gratiela]

♥♥♥ Even though the smut is soooo overwhelmingly hot in itself, what makes it EVEN BETTER is all the loving that accompanies it! ♥♥
And of course the fact that everyone has his own moments( even Rei-baby's bike!) - it makes everything run smoother, once you get to tell the deep feelings those 2 share ("pillow talk" - awwww)
I know close to nothing of Nightmare, but the way you describe Ruka who's all weary on the outside but a teddy-bear filled with explosives AHAHAHA OMG! and then when it comes to soothing and reassuring his lover he turns into awesomeness

[lady_sb]

Thank you :) And don't worry about being late, I saw that you were one of the first to comment on Part 3 so thanks!

And LOL glad you like my description of Ruka, he has always been like that for me in Nightmare but he sometimes shows this other side, which just makes me melt.

Also, glad you liked Christmas Favours! I enjoyed writing that a whole lot so nice to hear from people who read it ^^

[aitakute]

Thought I should properly review this before reviewing part III ;D

Once again, bravo! I think this chapter has a lovely sense of continuity from the previous, and I like the idea of how we're seeing things from Uruha's POV. As I've said before, the sex bit between the drummers = HOT. I think you've just started a whole new RukaxKai cult *sniggers* But apart from the sex, there's this underlying thing between them that makes it real and poignant.

I still find it hilarious that Uruha walked in on them the way he did with Ruki and Reita. It's like, he's got free supply of live-show porn 8DDD Uruha's sudden punch is also rather winsome - so unexpected and fun!

I'm gonna read Part III now and do the beta work for you; it'll be interesting to read it from Aoi's side of things now. ;) Have a good day at work~

P/S: AWANA KIJAL. LAND OF ZEN.

[lady_sb]

Yes I am trying to convert ppl to like RukaxKai LOL But for me they do make a nice couple for various reasons. I like the fact that they are opposites and how Kai is a bandleader while Ruka actually does a lot for his band as well.

Yes Uruha just has good/bad timing ;) Thanks again for the beta

PS: AWANA KIJAL HERE WE GO!

[lttlbrightlight]

I still need to read the other half and then the third part but I love it XD

[shadow_fictions]

HE HAD A FEDORA.
i LOVED this. but the fedora took it. ;D

<3

*goes to read III :D*