Fanfiction: Payphone (Part I)

[lady_sb]

Title: Payphone
Fandom: Sadie
Pairings: MaoxMizuki, AkixKei
Rating: NC17
Spoilers/Warnings: Smex
Prompt: (#8) The Phonebooth from 30_lemons, table found here
Disclaimers: I don’t own them, I’m not implying any of this is true, God isn’t that nice to me.

Summary: Mao and Mizuki have always been fast friends, from when Sadie first started. Eventually their

Comments

[arubai]

I love your kyo.
& this:
Times like this he always wanted to meet the woman behind the voice so as to see what drugs she took to make herself sound so happy.
YES. D<

[lady_sb]

Thanks, I loved writing him ^^

And YES I always wonder why are they so perky >_

[yuki_pon]

Mi why be such an insensitive bitch! XD

Can't you see poor Mao is hurting?!! D:

next chapter please!!! /o/

[lady_sb]

I'm working on the next chapter now ^^ And Mizuki has his reasons (as you will soon see).

But yes poor Mao :(

[lady_sb]

Oh then thank you so much for giving my fic a try, I really appreciate it ^^

And sadly no there aren't that many MaoxMizuki fanfics out there T_T a very sad state of affairs. They are such good friends and they do kiss during lives that I thought there would be more

[lady_sb]

Lol I will try! As always time is never on my side *sigh*

Actually my friend and I did write two short fics about them, as a kind of coupling pieces a while ago

http://community.livejournal.com/creativdestruct/10964.html

http://lady-sb.livejournal.com/23275.html#cutid1

Check it out if you have time ^^

[manabou]

Awwww Maooooo :( Poor thing. Poor Mizu too. he must be confused. Just TELL HIM god damnit :p Thank you

[lady_sb]

Thank you for taking time to comment ^^ Hope you will like the next part

[aitakute]

*applauds*

Hahahaha I think I have to agree with everyone when they say the conversation with Kyo is the highlight of the fic. :P I like the convo he had with Aki and Kei, but the one with Kyo takes the cake for both its seriousness and hilariousness. Love Kyo playing counselor ;)

I also like how Mao's so tentative/hesitant about telling Miichan how he truly feels - I guess that's always how it is when you started out as friends, and that the weight of your friendship is so overwhelming, you can't afford to lose the friendship should things screw up. The sex scene (blowjob, first bit) was hot, but more importantly it gives a brilliant contrast to the later bit (where Miichan had to run off for the PV shooting); one that happened and one that was denied.

Can't wait for part two! :DDDD

[lady_sb]

Thank you *hugs* and I really did love writing the scene with Kyo. He is just a complicated character that it was nice to try to picture him playing Dear Abby.

I actually had quite a time fleshing the two of them out, and it actually took me a few tries before I finally figured it out (I hope). And I agree with you, because they are such good friends that it would even be more touchy.

Working on part 2 now! *runs off*