Okay. I was planning on reading this and commenting tomorrow after getting some sleep, but I wanted to check out the beginning... and ended up reading the whole thing. So let this be a testament of how hot and gripping and wonderful this was. I am giddy and overjoyed. /flails
I loved the writing, the setting, the descriptions (the cloooothes omg), the characters, etc. I think you did a wonderful job with the plot, especially - it was tight, unpredictable and had one of the most satisfying endings I've read in Jrock fiction. :) The sexy bits were sexy, and I really liked that Miya wasn't suddenly in ~*lurve*~ with Tatsurou after he'd bonked him. They were both believable and so was their relationship.
And a;djf;sdfd I love you for putting Ao in there. :'D
Wow, thank you SO much for the nice long comment. I can't tell you how surprised yet flattered I am to scroll down and find your comment. You actually really made me grin ear to ear while reading it.
I am glad you enjoyed it, especially since you write very well yourself so this comment actually meant a lot for me (and I read your reply to my comment, which made me smile as well, which I will reply later).
I loved writing this so I'm glad you liked the plot. Glad you liked the progress of relationship, since for me I feel that any relationship between the two of them would be very non-rushed and just organic.
And LOL no probs about Ao! :) The more I read about him, the more I found him extremely interesting so I liked putting him in.
You're very welcome! I know I have been missing in action for a while, but I still feel like it's my duty to leave comments to my fellow MUCC fiction writers. XD The fandom is so small, we need to stick together!
Again, great job. :) I hope you write more about MUCC someday!
(Oops, I previously commented with my personal account. :D; Sorry about that!)
I'm glad I clicked this because I never felt this satisfied from reading fanfiction in a while. I loved how you weaved into the plot to fit with Tatsu's and Miya's personalities as well as the atmosphere in every scene. In all its seriousness, I was happy for angst not being present. Also the love scene was written so well, it did not butcher their manliness. Memming this :)
Thank you for the comment :) and thanks for the mem as well.
And glad you liked the love scene, I personally always try to make it as realistic as possible. I always do feel because they are guys they shouldn't really behave like girls and when it does it throws me off lol
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I loved the writing, the setting, the descriptions (the cloooothes omg), the characters, etc. I think you did a wonderful job with the plot, especially - it was tight, unpredictable and had one of the most satisfying endings I've read in Jrock fiction. :) The sexy bits were sexy, and I really liked that Miya wasn't suddenly in ~*lurve*~ with Tatsurou after he'd bonked him. They were both believable and so was their relationship.
And a;djf;sdfd I love you for putting Ao in there. :'D
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I am glad you enjoyed it, especially since you write very well yourself so this comment actually meant a lot for me (and I read your reply to my comment, which made me smile as well, which I will reply later).
I loved writing this so I'm glad you liked the plot. Glad you liked the progress of relationship, since for me I feel that any relationship between the two of them would be very non-rushed and just organic.
And LOL no probs about Ao! :) The more I read about him, the more I found him extremely interesting so I liked putting him in.
Thanks again for taking the time to comment ^^
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Again, great job. :) I hope you write more about MUCC someday!
(Oops, I previously commented with my personal account. :D; Sorry about that!)
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I ENJOYED EVERY MOMENT OF THIS, EVEN TEARED UP A LITTLE AND I AM NOT ASHAMED OF ADMITTING IT
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And glad you liked the love scene, I personally always try to make it as realistic as possible. I always do feel because they are guys they shouldn't really behave like girls and when it does it throws me off lol
Thanks again ^^
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