Collide: "Fall Down"

Jul 10, 2005 23:09

Anime: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Royai
Rating: G
~290 words.
Angst, end of series SPOILERS
Preview: and she wondered if he felt it as she did

Collide: Fall Down )

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forgottenlover July 11 2005, 06:12:52 UTC
::whimper:: so SAD ::purrs::

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lady_sinistra July 11 2005, 06:27:22 UTC
*pets* I know... I guess it's a prediction on possible FMA movie outcomes, what with pictures of their demotions. Roy!Angst is so easy, but I'm gaining a real taste for Riza!Angst as well ^^

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forgottenlover July 11 2005, 06:31:43 UTC
Rrrrrrrrrrrriza!

Oh god, want Greed/Riza now x.x

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darkillyria July 11 2005, 06:42:32 UTC
If you want Greed/Riza here a website. Its in Japanese but the art it really cool. Check it out.

http://rushlife.moo.jp/gemd_union/gemd_top.html

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darkillyria July 11 2005, 06:45:42 UTC
This story so sad, but I still like it. I like how you kept them in character

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lady_sinistra July 11 2005, 06:49:28 UTC
^___^ Thank you! I strive so hard to keep them in-character. FMA has such great characters, why mess with perfection? I'm glad you thought I got 'em right ^^

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ceasefire July 11 2005, 07:37:02 UTC
Argh! Foreshadowing! *dead* Excellent work but... it makes me nervous. ^^;

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lady_sinistra July 11 2005, 15:15:15 UTC
^____^ Yes, much foreshadowing. I tend to be an optimist, so it's what I do to keep angst from becoming overly depressing. I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

Yeah, I am nervous about the direction their futures will take in the movie as well... but, I have this core belief about Roy and Riza. Basically, it is that NOTHING would keep them apart for too long. So for now, I'm leaving this with a little foreshadowing ^_~

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ceasefire July 12 2005, 06:55:17 UTC
Heh, yeah, I just KNOW they meet up and have hot, sweaty makeup sex.

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lady_sinistra July 12 2005, 07:01:31 UTC
Oh, totally! ^^ Much hot, furious, clinging, gasping, thought-I'd-never-get-to-do-this-with-you-again sex! XD

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nineveh_kun July 11 2005, 11:15:54 UTC
Wao... I so wish I could write as good fan fiction as you! I really liked this one! Sad and emotional and deep. ^_^ My favorite combination. Beautiful!

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lady_sinistra July 11 2005, 15:20:36 UTC
*huggles you* I love getting comments from you! You are just too nice ^___^ Glad you liked this, I was a little afraid it might be a bit TOO sad. So happy it came across the way I wanted it to ^^

Thanks!!

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nineveh_kun July 11 2005, 16:52:06 UTC
Now you made me blush! *^_^* Well, I just love reading your fics. <3

It's... comfortably sad. Sad in a way that makes your heart ache ia a almost nice way. Since you don't know exactly what happens after the end it doesn't feel hopeless and I guess that's the reason why it's not totally heartbreaking. It's also one of the things that makes it so good! Yay for you!!

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glassbomb July 11 2005, 14:25:29 UTC
Well done! *hopes for more*

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lady_sinistra July 11 2005, 15:24:56 UTC
Awww, thanks so much ^__________^ And, I'm planning on writing at least one more part to this. Though, I have NO idea when. *laughs* My inspiration has been coming and going so wantonly lately...

Anyway, thanks again! ^_~

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glassbomb July 11 2005, 16:11:59 UTC
I really enjoy your fanfiction. ^___^ I want to friend your journal so I can read more of it! I hope you dan't mind.

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lady_sinistra July 11 2005, 18:22:03 UTC
No, I don't mind at all! I'm flattered, thanks ^__^

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